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For once i actually don't dislike such a woman. And weirdly enough it feels like something nice could come from it. View More
Carefree Path of Dreams · C25
1 year ago
K made it up to this chapter. I really just this once wanna see a strong female mc who does not submit. Who rejects romance and follows thru on her own goals... But then again, i probably will have to put up my own story for that... View More
My Beautiful Commander · C141
1 year ago

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Evil Emperor's Wild Consort
1 year ago
Reading Status: C110
Well, as I greatly enjoyed this read and eagerly await more chapters I shall give a review. Mind you, I shall give a unbiased (as much as possible) review with praise and critique where it is due.

Let's start this like the star scores.

Writing quality: Sometimes a minor weird thing pops up here and there as far as i can remember. Yet there is never a disruption in the reading flow, nor did it ever bother me. That pretty much means if there are flaws they are minor and just noticable if one looks for them. As such the quality gets a 4/5. Besides that one should remember it is an original story.

Stability of updates: Here I can say very little as I started and finished reading what is there within a single day. So I shall temporarily give this an average 3/5 for now till further observation. (Yes i am stalking this novel like crazy)

Story Developement: The story is very interesting yet a bit strange. How should I put it? The story does develope nicely, the pacing is good and the flow is well. Things are explained well enough and depicted good. Yet somehow it feels much easier to read then some other novels do. It is a much relaxing thing to read and does not evoke the thought of something being out of place. Basically what I am trying to say is that the story develelopement is going well up to this point. As thus 4/5 stars.

Character Design: Welllll~ thats some crazy **** right there. You know when life gets hard and gets to you, and you be just like meh I don't give a fluff anymore? Thats how it feels with the characters. That is not meant in a bad way though. The characters are all different and for once, for tis one story there is no character I don't like. They all are written excellently and fulfill their roles and personalities as they should. There are no slipups on the behavioural pattern they should have due to their character. As such this gets a lot of praise from me, besides that even if very very slowly there is character growth and change. I like that it happens this slowly without changing anything major, staying true to how the characters should be and behave. As such I shall give my first 5/5 rating ever. But then again, it may just be that all those characters just fit my personality so damn well. And I just must love them to bits.

World Background: Here we are, the last of the categories to rate. Lets see... This story takes its time to explain its world, yet it is not done in a bad way like several other stories do. There is neither an info dump nor is there to little. Mostly what has to be known is introduced plus some trivia and tidbits left and right along the way. As such you never really feel lost about the world, nor are you overindulged in knowledge. So it always leaves you with something new to learn or wanting to know. The pacing of explanations is nice as well so it gets a 4/5 from me. That means there may be a little to improve here and there, but by no means is it lacking anything. Its like a delicious dinner, yet it could be that tad bit better if something else was added. Nothing has to change but there is room for growth is what I am trying to say :3

Afterword: Damn me I love the crazy in that story, I love the interaction between the characters so so much as it flows and feels natural. Their behaviour and actions are awesome. By no means are they perfect characters, they all have their flaws and own weirdness but that is what makes them so awesome and lovable. Putting all that crazy and weird into a single place creates a beautiful thing which made me drop legit tears from laughing so hard.

Sincerely Feyr~ View More
The Devil WithInn
1 year ago
Dat girl will never simply betray him. She is looking for excitement, someone worthy to battle. She wants to fight to her hearts content, so she will openly challenge. View More

PommyJosh: I hope it’s not as simply as joining as allies then betraying him lol. Maybe she’ll get on well with Maxwell ;)

Advent of the New Age · C19
1 year ago
I don't think Erika will ever betray him. It would break her character. As it is now she is the first character in any story i can identify with, about the trait of... 'loving' battles. I would probably 'feel' the same as she did :p Anyway she wont betray him. He gives her what she needs. It is much more likely that she will be a demon of war. View More
Advent of the New Age · C16
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

Feyr: Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.

Shadow Hack
1 year ago

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Omnipotent Sage
2 years ago
Reading Status: C21
Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review.

SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.)

Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.

Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same.

Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating.

Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.

Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)

World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher.

The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed. View More
Shadow Hack
2 years ago
Reading Status: C317
Well, I did start reading this story a a long time ago now. I kept reading it for a long time and did originally want to give it a nice and long review. Alas now I do not feel like that anymore.

Lets talk about the important stuff. I rate 4 as highest as 5 would mean perfect, and tbh there always is something or someone better out there. So take 4 as my max rating.

Translation quality: Nothing to say, its good and I can't remember finding any big annoyances or mistakes or typos.

Update Stability: Is fine too, nothing to worry about that.

Developement: Well lets see, it is reallly interesting. I like the things done to this story, the karmic stuff and all that is really interesting to read. And the direction the story is heading towards is awesome too. I liked a lot of things in this one.

World Building: This world is what kept me reading the most, as the world is super interesting and well created. It has an interesting backround and also has a nice view on things. It keeps stuff in suspense and makes me want to know more. It is what a story world is supposed to be.

NOW lets come to the character, the reason why I dropped this story.
I am really raging about that disgusting character. I gave it a rating of 0 points. While I love the rest of the story this character alone is disgusting beyond anything. Sure he has a few thoughts about his family and friends. But the rest is spend solely on *** and girls.

I was already about to drop it when he was fucking the 80 girls from the association. But still I kept going even though I was annoyed at his behaviour and character. Yet in the later chapters I finally completely had it with this trash. Attempted rape equals love in his opinion eh? the **** is this? Bull****.

It could have been a really awesome story, but with things like this hell no. I won't read anymore of it and can't recommend it either. This is beyond the limits of a mature tagged story. It is half **** and feels like the fantasies of a hormonal teenager :/ what this character is. Yet this is over the line in so many ways...

Also the 1 star for character is supposed to be 0 but the system doesn't let me.

geez... been forever that a story made me rage this hard... View More
Castle of Black Iron
2 years ago
Reading Status: C5
This will be my first review on this site. I do this mostly cause all these high ratings without a real review piss me off. Lots of people here seem to vote really high and say novel x is the best ever. Or this is my favourite or such. Well, I shall (at this point did) take notes while reading and point out mistakes.

While doing this I will also write down my thoughts and such.

(Originally I planned to read and review all chapters, but read below to know why I stopped at two)

I will now point out several things bothering me. Not sure for how many chapters I will do that.

Chapter 1
1) His sister comes home and she calls ''I'm back, brother!'', yet in the next paragraph he thinks about her as a girl. This is inappropriate and very weird as he knows its his sister. This is a weird/bad style.

2) No.7D101. What is a foothold in this world? What is a safety code? This is confusing and could have been handled better.

3) Silver hunter, iron monster. Ranks all right, but throwing them around randomly is not helpful at all.

4) In the first paragraph it says he arrived in this world a week ago, half a chapter later it says he's been here for one month.

5) It also says at first that he came to this place via time travel, which would mean he's in the same world, just in a different time period. But apparently he didn't, as it seems that he has taken over another's body, like what happens in transmigration. Even though it is not even mentioned, which makes it illogical and confusing. Zero consistency up to this point.

6) He says he's so weak it's worthless to fight even the weakest monster outside, yet he plans to try his luck outside the next day. (remember this here)

7) I won't mention the fact that every human there appears to carry a small storage ring. I will first wait and see. For if the ability to create such things is there in such a big scale it should have a major impact on humanity.

Chapter 2:

1) Right at the start of this chapter, mc/narrator suddenly becomes omniscient. He completely describes the feelings of his sister. Should have been handled better.

2) When a stranger appears in his sister's room, it somehow can only be a vampire. Why? It could also be a crazy person. There is absolutely no reason for me to believe it's 100% a vampire. Neither fangs nor other things are noticed by mc at this point. It is only red eyes...

3) So he threw this school bag at the vampire. And in this brief distraction he: ran over, picked his sister up, and sprinted out of the room while carrying her. So he did that in 1-2 seconds tops. Well congratulations Mr. MC. I should rename you Flash. For me, the mc was/is at this point of time just a normal human. Nothing indicates he is stronger or faster. Also, his life force is running out. Which basically would mean he's growing very weak and frail. Yet nothing of it seems true. Now, I do not want to hear about book logic. This is a issue of basic logic. The actions are unfeasible in themselves.

4) Also, before I forget an important point. Earlier it was mentioned that footholds, which I assume are cities or such at the frontier (if that's a thing), have a barrier. How did the vampire even get in? Another logic issue at this point. Even though vampires blend into human lifestyle, I don't assume they are just born inside towns. And if a vampire attacks inside a town, there would be a search. I also would assume there are methods to find them. Otherwise it would be highly unrealistic. Same as checks for people entering the town, just because there are such vampires. I would expect very strict immigration protocols from town to town or for travelers. You prolly get the gist of what I mean.

End of chapter 2: Vampires are supposed to be able to blend in. Yet this one acts incredible stupid. Ignoring a possible threat (mc) and just goes for his prey. Not even animals behave this stupid, yet a very smart predator does? SO many logic issues here. I am not even sure I want to continue doing this review or even reading this story. I will probably just drop it here. It is annoying me too much.

My temporary review for two chapters would be:

Translation quality; 2/5 readable, alas there seems to be a lot of mistakes in the translation and a lot of weird wording. Either that, or the author started the novel inconsistently and weirdly worded.

To judge the rest would be unfair without reading more of it first. (Alas I am forced to put stars, so everything else gets 2 stars too.Yet this is not intendet as judgement) View More
Monster Paradise
2 years ago
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