Shiridon

11mth

Commented

I am proud of you Watermelon. your like your father.

I cleared my throat and looked towards the orange haired kid scowling, like normal. "Ichigo when did you invade soul society!?" I exclaimed.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Shiridon

1yr

Commented

when was the cats Name dropped?

ch 361 Chapter 327

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Shiridon

1yr

Commented

bad take. Canon ron has sonething against charity. just a reminder. and fanon rin would rather steal and spy Than accept charity.

She was no Ronald Weasley, after all.

Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician

Anime & Comics · KasiCair

Shiridon

2yr

Replied to Kazuares

he is the author. that alone is enough to destroy any powerscalling he wants. it is them with original stories. there is no abitary border for fanfiction. you comment hit a nerf with your ton. good day to you.

Alright guys, I read what you put. I could sit here and argue, but It's not really a big deal in the grand scheme of things. I don't deny the arguments said by those who disagree with me, there are valid points. But at the same time I think it can be argued in my favor as well. I'm just going to leave it at this for now.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Shiridon

2yr

Commented

wow quiete an improvement.

ch 0 9 White Orchard Inn

The Witcher: Living in the Continent with Scarlet Rot Ability

Video Games · mark_kiple

Shiridon

2yr

Commented

I want fanfiction with Crookshanks as the villain as counterpart to this one

ch 14 The Trolling of Severus Snape

CROOKSHANKS-A Harry Potter Fanfiction

Book&Literature · Brutality

Shiridon

2yr

Replied to DMC_dragonknight

for me it was great.

Alright, I heard everyone's comments about how last chapter went. I can only say i'll try to not do that again in the future.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Shiridon

2yr

Commented

why wants every author let their mc make their own breathing technique. your mc is still human. he should not be able to creat his own technique fast. pls atleast pls keep it useless till he truly deserves it. also no hate and thx for the chapter

ch 18 The Mad Breathing

What? A Group Chat?

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Shiridon

2yr

Replied to PrimordialMofu

from what I know that is not truly confirmed and only a theory

In Nasuverse you can call it First Magic, one could materialize out of nothing, there was no official name of the magic but I'd call it Denial Of Nothingness.

What? A Group Chat?

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Shiridon

2yr

Posted

I will Go through all criteria this site has. Writting quality:St the Start it was bearable But it sadly degraded in later chapters. Story Development: it runs paralel to the noxian Invasion ans since there is Not much know about the Invasion I can t judge it Charakter design: its okay just nothing revolutionary. it gets worse because of the writing quality. Update stabillity: it seems stabil. World bullding: runeterra is a large and beautifull World that the author doens't always know how to utilise.