Surname Mu is finei checked earlier and there is 'mu' in japanese surnameIt's the Xiaoxiao that needs to be changed
Also can you suggest a new name for the protagonist..
Anime & Comics · Abhii_28
Pain... his real name, at this point is still a secret.
"Finally, people like Hatake Sakumo, Second Hokage, Third Raikage, and Nagato of Akatsuki are Peak Kage Level."
Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon
You know.... i think you like detective arcs too much 5/5 for creativity and story pace hope we go back to the real naruto story though, two case solving arcs are enough don't you think?
ch 203 Chapter 203 - B Rank Mission: Conclusion
Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
Ryan - "Press x for doubt."
TV · CultivatorReader
+1
Women
Ching Shih said too. Erik was watching this all while some imaginary veins were popping on his head. Just 'Nexus' was not okay, but 'The Nexus' was… It was at that time that Erik again concluded that it doesn't matter how old you are and how long you live with a woman because you, as a man, were fated to never understand the inner workings of this complex creature. Letting out a sigh in defeat, Erik made the official announcement.
Book&Literature · DonnutHermit
And here i'm hoping for Kanshou and Bakuya
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Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
"That's it!" Josh yelled. Feeling his genius kicking in, Josh couldn't feel more proud of himself.
Anime & Comics · blazuki
I then extended my hand and gathered the surrounding energy in my palm, no one except me was able to see the energy before but now due to the density of the energy it is visible to the naked eye, the energy then took the shape of a katana.
Anime & Comics · Omega200
Azoth sword from Fate
I was actually thinking and a hybrid Bisento/Glaive and magic staff to boost his combat and magical abilities all around.
Anime & Comics · Alexander_the_grey
Sagara Sousuke, Sagara is the family name i think...
"Nice to meet you as well. I'm Sosuke Sagara" Sosuke replies with a slight bow.
Anime & Comics · Grimm48
but they can reproduce with other species. Just like Kanan from star wars clone wars
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Movies · lawless_last6969
Please don't it's already good, better than most fanfic i've read. Keep the updates, more chapter please.
didn't really proofread it, I'm tired, will rewrite it soon
Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda
Credit. .. . there's no dollar in space yo
This will be the starting point to his own empire, but there's no reason he couldn't go ahead and start trying to branch out. "Hmm, that is definitely a lot to take in, but I have bad news for you, Padmé. The Senate won't help you. They're just a bunch of corrupt old dudes who only move for the highest dollar. And unfortunately, the only other people in the galaxy who could compete for the top dollar besides House Kahl, is the Trade Federation. And I know you love talking about peace and friendship, but that stuff doesn't fly in the real world, sweetie. The real world is all about give and take, balancing the scales if you would. Nobody gets anything for free. So, that question is, are you willing to pay the price for my help in freeing your world from oppression?" Moka asked, turning into business mode, giving Padmé a charming smile with a twinkle in his eyes.
Movies · Lord_Bell
"Subete o Kiru ha. Such a simple and straight-forward name." Akihiko muttered to himself as he smiled.
Anime & Comics · SupremeCookie
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Anime & Comics · SupremeCookie
* Seismic sense * Metal bend (not magnet, need touch) * Vibration/Earthquake/Quake (Shirohige da! !)
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Anime & Comics · Retro_
Shinjiro, Shintaro, Shinya, Shinichi...just a suggestion
Also can you suggest a new name for the protagonist..
I really don't want to open a harem here
Anime & Comics · Abhii_28