“Little Mischievous Mary” … I usually hate how names never translate correctly, or even consistently, but I can’t help but get a kick out of this one. Even if it gives a really false impression of Rogue.
At first, he was entangled with Little Mischievous Mary. Later, he realized that Little Mischievous Mary's ability was too difficult to deal with.
Movies · Webnovel_Addicted
You know, almost every Chinese author I’ve read seems to believe most Americans just stand around waiting for a chance to call some poor Chinese immigrant “yellow boy”, or “yellow monkey” or something. I know they exist, but I quite literally have never known anyone in my entire life who was that racist toward any other group. It’s interesting they think the US is that bad.
"Hey … why are you here again, you yellow boy!"
Movies · Webnovel_Addicted
We read a chapter ago about how bored Vision has been the last couple months … here is something that would vastly increase his power, ability, and versatility, and he doesn’t want to dedicate any of his otherwise free time to it? Wow. The laziest robot ever.
Magic was good and even if I'm sure I have a talent for it, I don't think I want to dedicate my time into mastering it.
Movies · QuackVader
… well, I suppose we should just ignore how this completely ignores the reality of human nature so we can enjoy the story …
"It's simple, Tony Stark. The answer is transparency. The difference between the elite and the normal people is that they have the power to restrict the populace to certain resources and knowledge but what if the line that separates them becomes transparent that anyone can get there as long as they struggle for it?"
Movies · QuackVader
Yeah, this makes no sense at all. The Vision that the author has created would absolutely not be doing this. He absolutely would not face Kang right now because a stranger wanted him to. He would absolutely not risk being away from earth for years or even decades right now. It’s always incredibly annoying when an author makes their character do something entirely against their nature just to force a plot arc.
True. I can't track the time in the Quantum Realm, I don't think anyone can. And there's also the fact that unknown years might've passed on earth by the time I arrive, which was why I needed to learn how to navigate the time-space stream that runs through a specific section of the Quantum Realm.
Movies · QuackVader
What happened to his 10% regen/min?
'I'm going to have to watch how I use this,' Harry realized as he reread the cost, "I can barely use the perk for an hour with my current MP.' Harry thought to himself.
Movies · William777
He is literally the strongest man on earth … ever … and he wants to make money from local wrestling? Ffs … I see the obligatory single digit IQ of protagonist MC’s is on strong display here.
"Recruit amateur wrestler, play against Wrestling King Bone Saw for 3 minutes, and get a reward of 3000 USD!"
Movies · BoT
… cusp of the world? What has he been smoking? That serum does nothing more than make him the very weakest of the “powered” in the world. In many ways it’s far more dangerous than being a normal human.
"At last, I have a card that can stand on the cusp of the world." Kyle breathed a sigh of relief. It was as if a huge burden had been lifted.
Movies · DaoistMarcTempest
Wasn’t he just thinking how he would have to perfectly pretend to be “Kyle”? Asking frantically about strangers, and about what year it is, is most certainly not normal. He needs to chill a bit.
Mother of God… quit playing around and tell me!
Movies · DaoistMarcTempest
Huh? Charles is scared to death of Draul for being “beyond omega” level, while Magneto looks down on him for being “merely” alpha level? Bit of a gap there. Which is it?
He, who was a god to them, was opposed by some mere Alpha Level mutant. His name had been sullied since that day. Some even thought of taking his throne for themselves but how could he let these fools succeed?
Movies · Draul_TheOminous
… wrinkled and calloused hands? And the first chapter had him talking as if he was about to die of old age at any minute. But he’s 40 years old. The author has to be a teenager. It’s the only explanation for considering 40 a washed up, wrinkled prune who can only wait for death. How depressing.
They weren't wrinkled and calloused as he remembered and he could remember damn well because he used his fucking hands yesterday. And now it look liked he just went to sleep while they took the most expensive of skincare therapy. As if he just took an elixir and suddenly he looked…
Movies · Draul_TheOminous
Well, interesting way of looking at it. Just gonna point out that it’s also a really lousy way of looking at it if you hope to make money from your writing. If it’s just for your own enjoyment, whatever floats your boat … but I’d still suggest rewriting and separating the really bad chapters into their own volume or something. It could give a good view of your presumed growth as a writer.
I just couldn't bring myself to thoroughly change it or reword it despite its heavy flaws so a little heads-up for those new to this fic. I just wanted you to know that the story picks up momentum after Chapter 13 - 14, so do try and stick around.
Movies · Draul_TheOminous
It’s not a warp drive. It’s neither warp, nor a drive.
He spent a lot of money on intelligence fees to collect the materials for the Warp Drive to get those high-level materials' whereabouts and contact channels.
Movies · Novelette_Seeker
It’s not a warp drive. It’s neither warp, nor a drive.
Zeke's eyes flashed when he mentioned the matter of the Warp Drive.
Movies · Novelette_Seeker
It’s not a warp drive. It’s neither warp, nor a drive.
"I also need to tell you, that the material of the Warp Drive, so far, all the feedback from the intelligence providers have been collected, please take a look."
Movies · Novelette_Seeker
…wow. So, several paragraphs of describing a “warp drive” that is obviously some kind of wormhole drive instead, except for the quantum particle collisions part not making any sense. Now we realize it was supposed to be transporter tech … and the quantum particle collisions still make no sense, seeing as that is absolutely the last thing you want to happen near a transport. And the limiting factor is not power, it’s computing and scanning power. For gods sake, there’s no excuse for this kind of mistake when a 10 second google search will help get it right.
Not only that, due to modern technology, the Warp Drive that Zeke would be able to achieve could only transmit items, and could not transmit humans like in "Star Trek 8".
Movies · Novelette_Seeker
… “I won't try and bore you with an enticing synopsis, just read this and give me money so I can stop being poor and you can stop being bored” … Yeah, well … I’m afraid if you can’t even be bothered spending a few seconds to promote your work, or give even a single sentence to give readers some idea what you are writing about, or translating, you will most certainly remain without readers … and poor. I get you are trying to be clever, but that’s not the way it works.