Korriberg

2yr

Commented

definitely rooting for Klea. best girl, and so much more impactful history between the two, compared to Gwen, Morgana and Silvia.

ch 513 Vanaheimir

Earth's Greatest Magus

Fantasy · Avan

Korriberg

3yr

Posted

Sounds interesting and kinda hooked me, not enough though to gloss over the grammatical mistakes. I'll probably be back once the story has been proofread. A grammar check would really help. besides that it sounds pretty interesting. I'm just a stickler for spelling/grammatical correctness in the stuff I read. Even if my own English is flawed, not my first language. Should the grammar improve dramatically in the later chapters, please let me know so I can continue reading!

Cold Blooded Princess

Eastern · cutelit4ever

Korriberg

3yr

Commented

**** you sasageyo spoiler :( good story tho

ch 116 Chapter 116: 101

My Hermes System

Fantasy · Romeru

Korriberg

3yr

Replied to KyleSullivanJr

that's fine, I'll still continue to follow your work as I do enjoy most of it :)

ch 50 Chapter 50: Second Try

Black Market Merchant

Sci-fi · KyleSullivanJr

Korriberg

3yr

Commented

hey there, enjoying your story. maybe cut back on some of the chapters not focused on the MC, sometimes it kills the suspension. just my opinion tho, still enjoy your work. :)

ch 50 Chapter 50: Second Try