All these options and he chose to be a discount All Might. Boring AF story.
ch 0 1 Prologue
Anime & Comics · A_strange_man
This chapter was hilarious 🤣🤣🤣.
ch 11 Sweeping All Treasures
Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
He saw his parents die in front of him from a disease. He got scared because of that.
"Well then, I'm going to become an apothecary. I'm going to make.... a Live-Forever Never-Die Pill!" Bai Xiaochun began to pant, and his intrigue for spirit medicine reached an unheard-of level.
Eastern · Er Gen
Very awkward paragraph. Phrasing could be better.
And the days passed, with me practicing and learning everything Makoto decided to teach me, apparently I had a knack for it, which was weird considering my original world had no magic or mystical shit… unless you count politicians doing nothing but still being elected… but that's not magic… I mean.
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
The novel's kind of boring. The MC is very bland. Just because you made up some incredibly convoluted back story for the MC does not mean he suddenly becomes interesting. The MC has no aspirations, no strong feelings, no goal and no objective. If all he is going to be doing is help out Hajin, I might as well go and read the original Novel's Extra. Just giving him some dragon powers isn't going to make him any more likable or interesting. The song lyrics are also annoying. Half the chapters are nothing but him singing or listening to music. Good luck for your writing journey. Hope your future works are better.
ch 10 CHAPTER 9 – What to do now? (Part 2)
Book&Literature · dvelasquez
Author, please don't use any lyrics. It is really annoying and cringy. It also interrupts the flow of the story.
ch 0 9 CHAPTER 8 – What to do now? (Part 1)
Book&Literature · dvelasquez
Half of your story is just copy pasted knowledge from the wiki. 23 chapters in and most of the actual story can be condensed into 10 chapters.
ch 23 Chapter 23: Way of the Shinigami(2) and Noble Phantasms
Douluo Dalu 3: Fire and Steel[Dropped]
Anime & Comics · FroztDouluo