The Elders/Characters are Brain dead there is no single thought going on up there. He beat everyone left and right and suddenly his 1 star aptitude scares everyone away.
maybe say "The old Kiernan wasn't a very good student," I almost got confused that the current him was not a good student.
'I am lacking a lot of knowledge. Kiernan wasn't a very good student, as he spent all his time practicing martial arts to try to catch up on the geniuses. There is so much he doesn't know.
Martial Arts Worlds
Fantasy · Alekzi
What's his level? there is almost no focus on his System in the passed few chapters. You get no sense of his progress.
Correction () - "regarded them as a (piggybank) to squeeze.
However, he also needed to find a way to get rid of the good-for-nothing leeches who were given everything but, instead of being content and thankful, regarded them as a piggyback to squeeze.
SSS rank Mother-In-Law to an Invincible Family
Fantasy · Anime_timez24
people, beasts and beings (missing a comma)
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I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
young lady or young miss
After all, he did effortlessly saved their young master. And he clearly holds the power to kill her as well, yet he chose to save her.
Absolute Yin-Yang Desire System
Eastern · CosmicPrime
"A good chunck of their"
A good chuck of their attacks was considerably weakened, all because of the strange arts this little girl cultivates.
Absolute Yin-Yang Desire System
Eastern · CosmicPrime
"even seen in his previous life." "previous art." is just confusing.
These high-grade Heavenly Arts also produced powerful abilities he hadn't even seen in his previous art. One such Art included the ability to create Law essence claws that can twist apart space and slow down time!
Absolute Yin-Yang Desire System
Eastern · CosmicPrime
"Five loud thuds" is beter English "thumbs" make no sense.[img=recommend]
Five loud thumbs reverberated as the beasts' beheaded heads crashed into the snow. At the same time, the snowy white tigers' corpses slumped into the snow.
Absolute Yin-Yang Desire System
Eastern · CosmicPrime
Its a Carbon Copy of a Translated Novel put into AI to put a few added flowery/Poem like lines that makes no sense and makes it impossible to read.
Grand Return System
Fantasy · Scoturn777