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Second review since my last one got removed. Started off really good with the character and world development. But after one of the arcs the author got sloppy and started to add too many characters and the harem got out of hand.

It was a good novel til you started adding too many women to the harem and got out of hand with the MC growth too bad I enjoyed it while the story was good.

Bro this whole books went down hill during the demon arc

Started off great good background and character development now it’s just an overgrown harem with an overpowered MC like what a waste. It’s literally becoming too complicated to follow with all the women in his harem and then adding more and more characters in later arcs

I’m up to chapter 700 and I gave up on the novel. He rushed the character and plot development and also just started to add a bunch of extra things.

Yeah it started off really well. Then he got out of hand with the harem and powers. I still don’ understand why you rated it so high with some of the faults.

The story started off really good like it was one of my favorite novels tbh. Then the author just started to add too many women into the harem. And it just started to get out of hand. Then during the the last couple of arcs he just made Victor overpowered and didn’t really give him time to really develop as a character. Plus Vlad and some of the other characters are just obsolete at this point. It started off good and just went to a cluster f***.

Its a great novel over all. I started to read it when it first released. The plot and character development is awesome. Not to mention the villains Keep getting better and better. Plus theres a sequel as well and its just as good. But can someone inform me what happened to the Original site it was on i cant find it no more?