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Well, that was a good read. It's nice to have an author that can bring a story to a close while tying up loose ends. Most authors will restart the entire process after the resolution to the story ends.

Yeah, each chapter has basically one or two ideas being rephrased over and over again that it's blasted past filler into a waste of time.

Whether intentional or not, the author's writing style has become repetitive and lazy. This chapter was entirely pointless... The first part simply restated that the two characters didn't believe they could fight 100 elites. The second part reiterated Changyu's fear if altering the teleportation array. The only "new" information was that these elites we're frightened by his aura and then weren't, so they would continue attacking... If the writing style continues to be like this, I will probably drop this novel because this chapter certainly wasn't worth paying for 😑

Here comes Supreme Butterfly Changyu

The chapters are starting to have more and more redundant sentences, and it's annoying me... There's no need to say the same idea more than once or in slightly different words 😑

He did tell him by writing the #10 on a table in water or something.

What I don't get is why Xuanji, with all his foresight and understanding of his nephew's character, thought it was ok to tell him about the tenth prince. Anyone with 2 brain cells would realize it's setting up the 10th prince for assassination...

The cliffhanger I didn't want to appear, arrived. 😑

I hadn't thought of that. He probably can.

Well, I wonder what non plot armor way Zhou Wen will use to whether this storm. Granted, all MCs have plot armor.

I can't wait to see him humiliated by Roland who scares Tobian. What did the mage players have to do with a bunch of bards anyways?

New student incoming?

It seems from the context that they are the mercenaries that tried to hire them. However, they have no way to know that the light they ran to belonged to Roland's party.

An Sheng is one of the best supporting characters of this story!

Yeah, I hadn't thought about that.

I mean, how is giving a warning his fault? That is utterly foolish. Instead of wronging the guy who is supplying you info, you could use him to navigate the situation...

Well, that boy is going to "mysteriously" disappear. 🤣

lol

Yeah, I think the author has been experimenting with comedy recently.

Just you wait old "sage".