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One piece Fan Fiction: Renji · C0
1 month ago
I see Lost Amongst the Star update new chap, i think finally new chap, but reality is cruel 😢😢

Ps. I will waiting no matter how long cause this my favorit Marvel fanfic View More
Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic · C78
1 month ago

a_man_has_no_body: YES

Asgardian Sword God · C28
1 month ago

a_man_has_no_body: AYE

Asgardian Sword God · C28
1 month ago
Here I Come One Piece World !! · C49
2 months ago
Exp View More
Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C333
4 months ago

boread: Fortunately i didnt remove it from library.... lucky me...

Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic · C66
4 months ago
Same here View More

boread: Fortunately i didnt remove it from library.... lucky me...

Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic · C66
4 months ago
Good work View More
Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic · C64
4 months ago

Bierbart: Review at chapter 14 currently :D

First of to the writing quality. You could say the chapters are nice cause they are rather "long" if u compare it to many other fanfics.
But the english is pretty bad grammarwise. English quality is around second year gymnasium(school) with a C i would say roughly.

For the updates part there is currently nothing to complain about. Regular updates and more than 1 chapter a day usually.

The Story developement is rather new thats why 4 stars for it. He doesnt follow the mainplotline and makes his own.

The character design is rather bleak in my opinion. First thing is personal but i dont like the mcs name and the name of the crew. Name feels like an mtl from an hyroglyph which the mtl doesnt really now :D :/.
Furthermore it confuses with the story slighty or better said u have to read twice sometimes cause name is in his crew too.
Crewname etc really sounds slightly chuunibyou :/ same with some dialoges.

For the last part of the World background there isnt much to say currently. Seems like the normal OP background but it is currently too early to say much about it. But i guess people who are unfamiliar with OP-verse would have to read some things up to understand some story parts.

If the author reads this heads up :P Guess u just need a bit more practice for ur english if u are interested in developing urself. For the story part etc its mostly about the preferences from the readers but well my honest opinion is stated here and i even wrote a long reply for it on a broken keyboard :'D

One Piece: Strongest King System
4 months ago
Thx for the chapter View More
Era of Pirates · C34
5 months ago
Where the other chap? View More
Only I level up · C193
5 months ago
WHY!?!?!? View More
Only I level up · C191
5 months ago
MORE!!!! I NEED MOOORRREEE!!!!!!! View More
Only I level up · C191
5 months ago
More Release!!!!!!!.........Please😉 View More
Only I level up · C190
5 months ago
Reading Status: C162
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Black Tech Internet Cafe System
5 months ago
I must wait for 12am for the ss when login. Now i am broke 😢 View More
Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C158
5 months ago
Good. And make the pet a bird that can go to human world and houkomundo freely View More
Rebirth in Bleach · C34
5 months ago

LostSoldier1: Ability: I know where you live

Description: Once a week, forces the author to update extra chapters. Number of bonus updates may increase with a higher soul level.

Warning: If user is a Novel Leecher and thus lacking a soul, ability is ineffective.

Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 2 · C31
5 months ago
Thx for the chapter View More
Era of Pirates · C29
5 months ago

dranel2001: Directly to timelime, and please no harem!!!!

Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic · C42
5 months ago

dranel2001: Directly to timelime, and please no harem!!!!

Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic · C42
5 months ago
I need more chapter....... Thanks View More
[HIATUS]One Piece: Gol D. Roger Firstborn · C14
6 months ago

thestatsguy: Website : qidian china
Views : 7.95million
Rating : 8.7(427)
Chapters : 450+
Status : completed
Word count : 1.13million
author level : lv5
No of works : 2
Disscussion : 69561
Year started : 2017
Chinese title : 低维游戏

Low Dimensional Game
6 months ago
2nd View More
Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C89
6 months ago
3 tomorrow View More
Reincarnated in Marvel with The Strength Force · C0
6 months ago

Gamesempie: Hmm, so this is what an addict act like when they can't get their fix.
Now am I talking about the players in the novel or us readers?

Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C72
6 months ago

Julian_Ram: Well this is awkward.

Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C72
6 months ago

Deadman293: Are you sure that the hollowfication event is in 50 years?
I was looking for the Timeline of Bleach and the one I found says that happen 1 year after Gin joins and graduate from the academy.
You would lose a great oportunity at that to alter the original history.
As for what you should do I have this idea that you would make MC joins the 12th, under Urahara before he leaves and under Kurotsuchi, that way he can research the Quincys, and make his incomplete Hogyoku, 2 of them make Aizen a inmortal that Ywach couldnt kill, what would happen with 3?
With his own he could become a Vizard in secret and more.
Keep this fanfic in only Bleach please

Thanks for the chapter 🙇

Rebirth in Bleach · C24
6 months ago
Pure Bleach and use time skip View More
Rebirth in Bleach · C24
6 months ago
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