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Nightfall

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'A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads lives only one.'- George R.R. Martin

2017-07-26 Joined United States

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Yup yup this is how kids speak 🤣

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I Became a Scum in Depressing Game

I Became a Scum in Depressing Game

Urban · _Er

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*Foul*

Special ability: Fhoul gameplay — this talent makes him stronger when he holds an advantage over his opponent.

Transmigration: To become the greatest of villain

Transmigration: To become the greatest of villain

Urban · To_not_lose

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*praise*

Mohini took a long time to move her gaze away from Kent's face. She shook her head, muttering a prize for Kent's looks.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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how is it defensive? I thought that it breaks others defensive spells?

"My average proficiency improved to 75. With full focus, I can achieve 84. But the Void breaker Arrow is a defensive spell and I won't win a tournament just with a defensive spell. It's better to start practicing an attack spell." Kent muttered, assessing his strength and thinking of possible ways to win the tournament.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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what are nocturnal pets?

Angelic witches learn healing spells. The male ones are called healers. As for the night witches, they were a mix of both dark and angelic witches. They learn healing spells, curse magic, and usually raise nocturnal pets and use them for fight.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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your writing is pretty good, I would recommend using Grammarly to catch those spelling and grammar errors

Note: My writing is very fast paced. It might look forceful/abrupt in some places to read. But to avoid dragging the story by writing poetically, it is must for me. I don't want to use any AI to turn my writing artificial. Hope you understand. TQ.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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*feat*

"Just because of your feet at the Arena, I let you use the Aura room for an extra hour. Next time, don't stay after closing time. Do you understand?" The elder spoke with a displeased face as he stood in wait for Kent, even after closing time.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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*Boss*

Blackie's eyes widened in surprise, while Whitey nodded in understanding. "Boos, that's impossible. 500 gold is too much for any of our families."

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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I thought he had a red python???

"N-no… nooo…" The fat king shirked in fear while staring at the incoming fireball. Before he even thought of escaping, the black bull began falling from the sky as it lost the thought of flying.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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*Shuddered*

Arul, the previous runner-up, who stood beside Mia, shouted angrily as his pet, the red python, shredded in fear after seeing the fires from Kent's pet.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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*Tier*

Kent sighed disappointedly after hearing her reply. "The tire-one city is more than 500 miles away from here. As for the capital city..." Kent stopped talking, as the capital city is very distant from Silver Leaf Town.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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Maybe do a zero chapter with some of the character names?

Note: This chapter contain several names. Just go with the story. the names will be discussed again, along the story.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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the things Gus *stole* from the hotel room...

But just as he opened the bamboo bag, the things Gus steeled from the hotel room fell on the floor with a loud noise.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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Wait I thought he broke through to the 7th stage?

The elder realized that he had gone too far. He immediately passed the disciple token to Kent, which is now glowing yellow with the number six on it. (He finished the fifth, so he is placed in sixth-grade magus.)

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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pods??? thats gotta be the first time I see that used

Kent's body had already heated up, and he tried hard to control the shaking limbs. His wand was already erected, waiting for his first arrow to shoot. Unknowingly, his hands moved onto her tight ass. He grabbed both pods and began squashing them.

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Fantasy · PeterPan

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Is this normal? I have no knowledge about adopting kids but would there be a reason why they would have to be 24? is it like drinking that has a set age?

"Amh, sir as I said, the minimum age requirement to adopt a child is 24 years old and with a good financial background." The owner of the orphanage, a middle-aged old man, spoke with a troubled face. 

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Transmigration: To become the greatest of villain

Urban · To_not_lose

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Should be ",In C rank gates..." not crank gates

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Only Wisdom Awakened

Only Wisdom Awakened

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