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Though the story has weak logic and an unreasonable plot, I want to re-rate the story because it's fun reading and a good harem story. So it deserves 4.0+. It's fun, like reading a Japanese light novel. But too many forced plots and low-IQ decisions make me want to give WTF and 100-question marks so many times. (???????) Something like he refuses to use his main class; I feel like he says I will win the competition with only 1 hand and 1 foot so I can look cool and do page slapping, which is too childish for someone with a very low IQ. Or something like do betting with no equal wager. One more example: around chapter 480, he knows that the enemy starts hunting him but still uses his 15-minute CD teleportation boots just because his four friend guards stick with him. Then he risks his life trying to escape from the enemy, who knows his location. Seriously, is this really a reason to start a 15-minute survival countdown plot? That's why I say so many WTFs and "???????" in this novel.

One more example: around chapter 480, he knows that the enemy starts hunting him but still uses his 15-minute CD teleportation boots just because his four friend guards stick with him. Then he risks his life trying to escape from the enemy, who knows his location. Seriously, is this really a reason to start a 15 minute countdown plot?? That's why I say so many WTFs and "???????" in this novel.

Start with one of the good harem novels. No looping, no brainless plot and character, no page slapping But the novel's quality drops sharply when it starts the 18+ plot. It's now more like Japanese AV than a novel: sex, sex, and sex. It's annoying to read those childish and repeated 18+. After chapter 70, every plot now just focuses on how to convince a girl to have sex. Those 18+ chapters are the main theme now (70%+). So, don't expect any good plot (you may be ok if you love to watch AV every day:P)). I give it 5 stars for chapters 1–50, drop to 3 stars from 70–80, 1 star after 80, and try to skip those no-plot chapters. And finally, drop it completely after Chapter 100.

For the 1st half it's a very good novel worth 5 stars. But for the 2nd half, plot hole, illogical, non-sense, etc. I'm give it 1.5 stars, just skip the 2nd half if you expect good novel.

Your reason on the brother/sister part is unreasonable for 1 star, because it is not relate to quality of novel at all. It's like you read BL/YURI novel and say you give 1 star because it BL/YURI, that's too childish IMO. Just skip it if you don't like this type of novel.

Just make it harem if the plot is suitable for harem and not harem if your plot not suitable. Don't listen to non-sense opinion like "don't harem" or "please harem". It's not related to novel quality at all. Cheers.