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read upto chapter 31. The novel is pretty boring. its a DXD world where the powers of MC seems lack luster and not interesting. There is no buildup and climax in the story. Feels very boring to read also with the mixing of different anime feels very unpolished. Mixtures of different powers also feels clanky. Mostly feels like reading a story for muscle headed gym rat. Still gave a 5 star cause u know, if i give criticisms with low start it will get deleted by author.

adding zero two is not the issue, the implementation is kinda aprupt and cringe.

big brain, its called a novel review, not only 5 star rating. So readers will write the review according to what they feel after reading it. But not according to your whims.

The story was kinda good , but i missed the futa tagged, so i read uptill chapter 20 and i dropped it. I think the author would get much more readers and reorganization if he didnot mess up with the futa thingy, as not many people can relate to it which breaks the immersion. But still nice writing though and interesting but its not my cup of tea. Best of luck author.

The fanfic is not interesting at all to keep the readers engaged. The choice of the quick or wish is kind of bland. The cringy situation with the zero two is also bad. I read uptill chapter 15 and its not interesting at all with very few development on the path of storyline.

so bad writing , such inconsistency and too much fast pace. There is not much plot or story development. Depiction and facts about the fairy tail characters are so inconsistent. Lucy feels like bl0wup doll , natsu fells like overjealous bf and chinese mindless villain. Everything in this novel is very awkward and hard to read.

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Nice experience reading this to chapter 21. I would have given 5 star if the girls which betrayed MC were killed or not mentioned from now on but from how the story is going i dnt think its gonna happen. So.........

very bad writing. Author puts chapters as author notes and also put immersion breaking narrations which kill the involvement of the reader. Also the idea of onepiece system is interesting but the execution of it is very bad and boaring. Example: the Author could take some other interesting Fruit which would make the reading much interesting. Also in a cultivation world the pace the MC is developing is very slow. Also mixing of onepiece system and cultivation makes is very uninteresting. The integrations between the characters is also not executed properly to keep the readers engaged. All the chapters feels very boring , lackluster and very short. I would like to see author improve and will edit this review later if it gets better.

Its verrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyy slllllooooooooow pace, It took 20 chapters for prologue and its been 30 chapters and the mc is still in baby phase. Wow. Even if the story is like diamond readers like me loose interest in it if it drags on way to much. At first there was anticipation then slowly i started loosing interest in what will happen next then i had to drop it completely. I guess it might interest few people but this fanfic is not for me.

man if the rewrite is so bad i wonder how much bad the original was?? Bruh your concept is ok but u are running to fast , faster than a Lockheed SR-71 Blackbird and sometimes teleporting and skipping major keypoints which makes the story interesting. Please improve the story and remove the major randomness and give some backstory or introduce the powers and stuff. This will make the fanfic way better.

what the hek is going on with this fanfic?? The randomness is so cancerous that it started to hurt my brain. I tried putting my brain on auto mode and tried to go more than 10 chapters but i failed. Suddenly gaining powers, suddenly practicing in dojo makes u cut a building, suddenly we know that he is part of an organization, suddenly he already had emiya's power. This novel seems to be written by a child suffering from adhd.

Very bad , very bland, nothing interesting. Its like i am reading a log book. The MC is way overpower but its ok if its slice of life but no, nothing like that. MC is doing whatever he wants. Also he summons a bunch of other characters from different anime and couldnot portray the characters well enough. I read upto chapter 16 and nothing interesting is going on. Also change of POV to other summons is so bad and immersion breaking. All the time i am reading it fells like i am reading nothing. Introduction of sudden OC without proper explanations and many more things which makes this novel atrocious to read. The novel is very fast pace which is also another cons.