Dvoid13 - Profile

I have read the first four chapters and so far the character is unique. She is strange but an interesting kind of strange. I can't wait how she turns out and how she interacts with the world around her.

A page turner that I would have loved to have been longer. The characters are well known but you still put your little spin on them that I enjoyed very much. I hope you continue creating some more wonderful stories.

The concept is good. The divine spirit angle could be explored a little more and how he could of earned his godhead could have been more in depth instead of poof here it is.