Who?
"Henry Morgan," he introduced himself, extending a hand.
TV · Illusiveone
You're writing too much of the original scenes. As a fanfic fan, I think most of us recognize what originally happened, so a quicker snippet of it could work to avoid leaving out the MC too much. This read too much like reading the actual episode of Castle rather than your own writing.
ch 16 CH - 14 - Hedge Fund Homeboys - Part - 4
TV · Hellblaze
Thanks for the chapter. I would love to see it keep to Gossip Girl and Castle as the main, with Suit on the side, and some slight crossovers with others (nothing too deep; something like the Psych chapters is perfect where they intersect a bit but don't really get into one another).
ch 15 CH - 13 - Hedge Fund Homeboys - Part - 3
TV · Hellblaze
Great story so far; interesting back story that fits into the world well. Sad that North Blue wasn't explored as much, but it is interesting to see the ideas for islands.
Ironheart pirates (SIOC)
Anime & Comics · Ironwolf852