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EndlessVoid
male LV 13Just some random guy. Nothing more to be said.
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its your story, however you are really underestimating lucifer. even the tv show he sent a full grown man flying with a simple push and basically ignores damage(when not near decker) and is only really weakened while in her presence. but even on the vampire scale the twilight vampires aren't even up there in regards to power with gifts making up the difference.
'H-How dare he! How dare he hurt MY Alice!' Lucifer thought with a snarl, as her eyes began to glow a blood red. Following after the downed vampire, she didn't give him a moment to respond before launching another punch to his stomach, throwing him into a nearby tree. A groan escaped Edward as he looked up and found Lucifer standing over him. While Lucifer was strong, her physical capabilities weren't as strong as a Twilight vampire, not yet at least.
Travels of the Daughter of God
Movies · ArtoriaPendragon_
this is bad. she is the daughter of god. and mortal vampires are stronger then her not counting the additional immortal buffs.
'H-How dare he! How dare he hurt MY Alice!' Lucifer thought with a snarl, as her eyes began to glow a blood red. Following after the downed vampire, she didn't give him a moment to respond before launching another punch to his stomach, throwing him into a nearby tree. A groan escaped Edward as he looked up and found Lucifer standing over him. While Lucifer was strong, her physical capabilities weren't as strong as a Twilight vampire, not yet at least.
Travels of the Daughter of God
Movies · ArtoriaPendragon_
honestly the fact your character is a divine being and instead of creating training that would kill mortals like and infinite gravity chamber for massive gains he is trying to create shortcuts is kinda ridiculous that by all means should be useless on a divine being.
'I'll need to speed up the creation of NZT-48.' I said to myself knowing that it would be hard to speed up the creation but I would try regardless.
ReLife In Fake Twilight
Anime & Comics · outsidr
yeah its full of women that will peak his interest with the way the character is unique and powerful im all for ivy and harley.
(Sigh. Now I want Harley and Poison Ivy in the harem. DC truly is the treasure trove of powers, women, and villains.)
The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
seems like. I really enjoy yhis story so thanks anyway
ch 69 The Beast Of The Apocalypse VS The Dragon God of Tyranny 3/3
The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
fair but your characters attraction to quality women in a universe like DC he cant come outta there without one or four ladies for his horde not counting hexa
ch 69 The Beast Of The Apocalypse VS The Dragon God of Tyranny 3/3
The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
so many chance we can get a preliminary dc harem addition list
ch 69 The Beast Of The Apocalypse VS The Dragon God of Tyranny 3/3
The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
hopefully there's an explanation for the extreme over reaction here. we've all been jealous of something at some point. I could potentially understand him stewing in class but the next thing he is running through a forest throwing a tantrum that the girl he likes is just talking to another dude. FFS he didn't catch them rutting on the desk.
ch 11 Chapter 11:"Turmoil of Unrequited Love"
World of Supernatural: I'm Raizel(Twilight,VD,Originals,Underworld..)
Movies · AmouxCreationsX
I'll give it a chance but your MC has to make up 7 years of knowledge and even potter only had three years in difference. it's just gonna be a bit much to make it an understandable tournament without the Mc coming off as a god since he has literally weeks of experience in the magical world as a whole.
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yeah his inclusion in the tournament is a bit much. and the fact that dragons will be the first thing he hasn't had a flying lesson or anything yet isn't that a bit much? sure the Mc has proven to be powerful floating everything in class, but the kid doesn't know anything past a few days of classes at least harry was a fourth year.
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why is he world hopping so early? that's annoying.
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ch 0 4 Vampires, Teenagers, and High School.
Snow Leopard Cub in Twilight as... Bella's Baby Sister?
Movies · OmegaWolfe
this is basically a copy and paste of jbubu story reign of the new protogenoi. you should probably mention that too.
Percy Jackson : Gods Annihilation
Book&Literature · Moonhorse