Totally broke whatever dark and dangerous tone going on with the inclusion of Valera. Starting from when she showed up, the story went from dangerous to childishly comedic. The writing is still great, I just personally find Valera’s characterization as a cliche ditzy cheerleader-esque undead very dislikable. If this were anime, I bet I would constantly see an “uwu uwu” cutesy scene.
ch 22 [BONUS] A Pack Problem
Fantasy · John_Doever
This drama would’ve been a nice touch if the novel included how he got close to his soldiers, an emotional attachment to the readers. Right now, it’s just him being so emotional over people he leads but barely knows like a novice soldier and not a seasoned general.
ch 40 Chapter 40
War · Draejon
MC is a Psycho Puppy and Avilia is his master.
ch 37 The Much Awaited Torture
Fantasy · Drip
Good thing there was a warning about how Xanxia-level trashy the early chapters are.
ch 26 Leo's Tournament Part 3
Fantasy · Drip
The MC is a pushover.
A lord hunting for rats, really? Quite odd for a lord of the place to be given and doing menial labor, excuse me, “quests” from his own people in his own town. Are there no administration level quests related to him being a lord? There’s more but maybe it’ll be answered in later chaps. Otherwise, I like it so far~
ch 0 9 Bruno the Tax Collector
Games · Dao_Of_Fiction
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 0 1 The Burning Gallows
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
I hope this isn’t one of those Systems with a personality or an MC puppeted by one. This whole blackmail would just be a one off. Since otherwise, what use it there to read about slavery?
ch 0 2 June
From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show
Fantasy · SandKastle