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anothet psycho mc. The guy is unbearable, chapter 5 and i already want to strangle him. And a fucking bow as a weapon. I am out ! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Ok, so i was expecting nothing when i started reading. How wrong i was. It's really well written for webnovel. 5 star is to compensate for the really harsh review. The author don't go the Strawhat crew road, wich i find very nice (Contrary to a lot of people it seems). I find it refreshing, we still don't know exactly what he want's to do, MC still seems to try and find his way. MC is quite a calm fellow most of the time, and it's a nice change. He actually stop to enjoy the world :) In summary, it's a nice fanfic, it's no mac beth. But it's a cut above the other in my opinion.

The author doesn't give a F*** about his story. Wich mean the story is very badly written, structure syntax grammar are awefull :x If the author does not give a f*** why should we?

Wish fullfilment, there is more system and gatcha than true story in each chapters. MC ask for a system that is not too easy but can summon DK 1min after receiving His system, he can store capital ship in is inventory or even a full deathstar. So, there is work to do to make that one readable. And the author as the guts to allready ask for money...

It's not a story. It's 100% wish fullfillment. It's written like a shopping list of OP power. This is not the star wars fanfic you are looking for...