Awesome! I hope you are feeling well and taking care of yourself!
ch 11 A Brother in Arms
Movies 路 BeaulenSmith
Nice job 馃憤
Good job keep it up!
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: New Friend!
Anime & Comics 路 Yellow_Duck_Toy
Yea you jump to much I would have rather you stuck with the tournament. I like the story otherwise.
ch 19 Myrddin鈥檚 Journey (430 AD)
Book&Literature 路 athass_prkr
This is really good! Keep up the great work!
ch 0 3 A Path To A Better Future
Anime & Comics 路 GreenDragon1222
Great job keep it up!
ch 0 8 Ch.7 Night Time Raid 1
Anime & Comics 路 Vaekyr
Nice, keep it up!
Yea practice makes perfect. And if you found a bunch of mistakes by rereads then just do that once or twice be for posting. But in any case keep up the good work and don鈥檛 get discouraged!
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Book&Literature 路 f3f3
Ahhh cliff no one likes you!
ch 38 Player Killing Part 1
Games 路 invayne
Man i really like your story鈥檚, but you need to use grammerly or something. A lot of the mistakes would be easy for a word processor to fix right up and take your story to the next level. I will keep reading and enjoying your story and look forward to your improvement.
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Book&Literature 路 f3f3
Keep it up!
ch 0 2 The Fight Between Beasts and The Break Out
Movies 路 Bruh_Moment_2806
Great job!
ch 0 3 Carrot Top
Anime & Comics 路 GreenDragon1222
Awesome keep up the great work!
ch 21 Killing To Protect
Games 路 invayne
Thanks and great job. Is he going to be able to upgrade himself?
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: First Mission
Movies 路 AboutABoy
Awesome! Keep up the great work man, I can鈥檛 stop reading!
ch 42 The Expedition Package
Star Wars VRMMO: Galactic Expedition
Games 路 N3wman