Tee16 - Profile

some transitions between chapters are confusing and make no sense l. I think there are 2 such in the first 100 chapters. where the following chapter is in a completely different setting, action he is doing and where he is. this again happens at chapter 110 going into 111. how the heck did him sneaking into the cave, killing 1 bandit, transition to home now suddenly fighting the people chasing him for killing the bandit boss. it's so confusing at times. also a proof reader is needed, there are minor issues that need fixed. overall a good novel.

Is the author dead?? It's really really good. Just no more updates.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Good novel, just needs someone to proof read and check grammar. Storyline is good. I enjoy the character development. Well not much else I can say, since this stupid website won't let me post a review unless it is more than 140 words. Really so stupid to put that restriction.

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Good. Just need more chapters and a proof reader[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]