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Winder3563: Interesting. A novel with the MC as an NPC but with the player privileges.
Also I find the game elements fun(interesting) to read.
World development is good, giving the race distinction but my view on elves has changed to see, a deeper view to elves not being just archers.I Am A Legendary BOSS
perspherspley: I am a simple guy, as long as I enjoyed the story then I like it, and so far there is consistency in the story and the author really find the time to write how and why it is happening, the author explaining the situation so that it will not look like it is a forced development or plot.I Am A Legendary BOSS
FgoAddict: The setting reminds me of the legendary mechanic but with a fantasy theme added, similarly there are game elements along a promise of players coming in a year time. There are also elves royalties among other things, with the beginning being more of the mc building up his inherited village than solo play.I Am A Legendary BOSS
vincentatd: So far so good, and now I have to wait if this novel will be a permanent series on this site.
Waiting for a month is really tiring, have to try reading it on raw.I Am A Legendary BOSS
97Alex: Pretty good honestly, i personally haven't yet found another novel from the perspective of npcs(if anybody knows of something similar to this, tell me the name please), and this seems quite interesting, so give it a try, it's definitely different from other system or game novels, i hope webnovel will continue to translate this, though waiting till the middle of february for it is a real pain in the ass xdI Am A Legendary BOSS
HellDragon: Great work
The only bad thing is the beginning (The first 10 chapter) there many info dump but it’s improved after that
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WindsOfTheValley: Anyone else still reading?I Am A Legendary BOSS · C48
RandomWeirdDude: "Magic and martial arts sword sage" is a mouthful. This is just one of many odd translation choices I've spotted in these first 14 chapters.I Am A Legendary BOSS · C14
HuskyWarrior: He can troll them take out a average katana from inventory scream out (BANKAI) charge up his ki then put the sword back into his inventory then boom used flying thunder godThe Universal Villain · C27
ArtoriasRihan: What is the point of him revealing new abilities to the enemies? The smartest move is to just use FTG and teleport away instead of exposing more of his abilities to them.The Universal Villain · C27
Zeffur: Hiraishin? Or unless he doesn't want them to know he can warp through space time although kisuke does know about it, so its gonna become useless later on then? Because kisuke is gonna use that broken brain of his to think of a countermeasure and thanks for the chapter.The Universal Villain · C27
HellDragon: Reili can you tell us what level you must be to be rank as S.A.B.C?? The bottom Level and the upper level and thanks 👍Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C244
Reili: no chap tomorrow since i need to do uni work. I have an exam tomorrow.Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C244
Your_Average_Otaku: How can the monster Mystic Slyph Queen Shiro activate a blood seal letter addressed to human Kuromi? Is her DNA the same since she changed species twice. Human > Snow Girl > Mystic Fae. She is supposed to be a spirit race. Her blood should be very different from a human.Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C244
darkoneko: Now I'm curious how someone so old (well I assume 30 at least) and very likely to have been B rank or above came to die in a beginner dungeon in some remote city.
One guess is she met people her in secrecy but was betrayed ?Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C244
Wallabalooza: The writer has a lot of issues and, honestly, doesn't feel ready to write stories in English yet. There are a -lot- of grammar issues, and massive perspective problems in every single chapter.
As for the story itself.. the self-insert is a fairly successful novel writer (yeaaahhhh.. no) who acts pretty unnaturally given his reincarnated situation; the reincarnated part of his character seems mostly glossed over and forgotten. He doesn't use it for anything, and the relationship with his sister is exactly the same as in canon, even though there is an older, completely different person in the body of this character.
In fact, all of the characters feel extremely unnatural as a whole. People who should have no concept of technology or anime or anything just pick up on it without explanation and act like it's the most normal thing in the world. Characters' thought processes are unbelievable at best.
Very clearly written in one sitting, putting thoughts into words and then isn't properly edited, and it makes it feel incoherent and is difficult to read.
It's often written like the writer assumes we know what he's thinking and why he's thinking it, and jumps two or three steps in the buildup and explanation, only to land on something that feels completely out of place as a result.
An example would be the different characters sending information over the phone. How? It's never explained. First off, how are these technologically stupid people just sending "magic" and "swordsplay" over a phone? How is he receiving it? It's never even explored or explained a little bit, but just taken completely for granted and passed over. It's absolutely ridiculous.
Then there's the ghosts. He brings them cakes, but when the girl tries to hug them, she passes through them? Are they solid or not? The logic of the story's world is completely screwed. Not to mention that the kids weren't actually used for anything at all other than getting every character to say "G-g-g-ghost!" like they're Scooby Doo and forcing an interaction with that one girl. Even the set up emotional reunion was completely ruined by them just disappearing the second they saw her, and nothing further was explored about it.
Not to mention how the character learns "swordplay" by.. getting a manual about it(? somehow it changes to paper from his phone?) and then swinging his sword the same way 1000 times, like that is supposed to teach him anything. When you know nothing about the sword, you have a thousand things to learn before you even start swinging that thing around. Your posture, movement, grip, etc. etc. You don't just go and start swinging a sword and become a swordsman, and even then, swinging just one way isn't going to make you any better at anything; it's so silly.
The protagonist starts talking about opening up a restaurant out of absolutely nowhere. Like, it wasn't built up in any way, and the writer clearly just wanted to do it for whatever reason, even if it made no sense in-universe. It was justified because the character "knew a guy with a restaurant" and that he would get recipes sent over. Like that solves more than one or two out of a thousand problems with opening up a restaurant, and prepares him for that chaos in any way whatsoever
These are a few examples, but already this soon in the story there are even more I could pull from, and I'm positive it will continue throughout the whole thing.
Basically, it feels like whoever writes this doesn't live in the real world. Their logic is completely off in so many ways. It really feels like the writer has gotten too deeply integrated in the universe of anime himself and has forgotten how actual people think, act and speak, and it really shows in the writing. Overall, it just comes off as disconnected and childish.
I don't know why this story is rated 4.6. Either the negative reviews are deleted or you guys just have insanely low standards. 2.4 was already generous for me.
For the writer: Work harder on your basics. Spend some time figuring out your English grammar and read some well-written, published stories to try and get a better feel for how to actually present a decent story. Your ideas aren't terrible, but your execution is very lacking; especially for someone clearly wanting to make money off of this. It takes a lot of hard work to get good at something, and writing is no different.
Good luck.Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group
HellDragon: At last now didn’t you remember the first time they do paywall what they told us???The Legendary Mechanic · C601
Robrave: Don't you know how privileges work? There are still normal chapters and we will get them every single day. Nothing changed, really for free folks.The Legendary Mechanic · C601
Unlucky_you: where's my daily chapter? to add it at the premium stockpile even though it was adjusted from 2 chaps a day to make it look plenty is just SCAM!!The Legendary Mechanic · C600
MizunoKage: And they aren't even the author, just a money-grubbing translator.The Legendary Mechanic · C600
HellDragon: I think we need to wait 10 day at least 😑The Legendary Mechanic · C600
Nobodyknocks: So let gets this straight. We have to wait until the priviledged stockpile is done before we can even get a chapter? Today's chapter went into that stockpile and its a lot of bsThe Legendary Mechanic · C600
Esus: What is this ****? Normally, there are loads of chapters in a stockpile then they do the privilege thing. I would spend it on privilege if its like LotM or other novels, but you include normal released chapters to privilege? Not gonna get even 1 cent from me with this fucking marketing.The Legendary Mechanic · C600
Cyclops1i: Really? So now you’re just taking chapters from the normal pool and adding to privilege when it’s time to update? Fuck youThe Legendary Mechanic · C600
Rends: Welp, so... 1 chap a day is gone too? we paid to read with coins and now we need to pay for priviled? what's the different with patreon translatioN??The Legendary Mechanic · C600
Arcaza: All new chaps on premium, I jut hope they realize you can read this online for free, I'm. Just trying to help by not doing it but to them now I say screw itThe Legendary Mechanic · C600
Pedhut: Premium when they're only published 1 chapter/day?
Guess that's it then, time to read it somewhere elseThe Legendary Mechanic · C600
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