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Jlee0219

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Exploring the various Daos of the universe

2017-12-22 Joined Global

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Replied to goofy_little_man

For later chapters, how does this impact battle mechanics? Wouldn't having a smaller qi core put your at a disadvantage?

A shorter awakening time would mean you had a small Qi Core, making cultivation easier. Trying to fill your Qi Core with Qi would take less time and effort, and compressing your Qi when attempting a breakthrough would be much easier, since you had less Qi to compress.

The Villain's Sword Is Sharp

The Villain's Sword Is Sharp

Eastern 路 goofy_little_man

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Hey Author do you read over your chapters once you've finished writing them? I think a quick grammar check would help considerably with the flow of story.

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This is a mouthful and difficult to understand. You might want to try rewriting this author.

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The Master of Seventh Gate

The Master of Seventh Gate

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Agreed, this is a level of description you don't see often in original works

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Level Up Legacy

Level Up Legacy

Fantasy 路 MellowGuy

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