why did his age change? he was 10-11 in the first chapter.
ch 20 Elder Yu’s Disbelief
Eastern · Annual Ruthlessness
what's the sinkhole realm?
"Do you guys know how long the fastest record for a person from the Qi Training Realm to the Sinkhole Realm is?"
Eastern · Girls Are Cute
editor your presence is requested!
Di Yin was already not confident of winning against Di Yin alone.
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
take his storage ring!
The body covered in blood of Ferguson suddenly emerged, then fell listlessly on the ground. He was deader than dead!
Fantasy · Chowdhury
fix the font error please.
A moment later, the voice of the Master of Hellfire Hall sounded slowly, "Sun Stone, Heavenly Constellation Stone, Blood Congealing Pill, Life Spirit Spring Water… Is someone trying to reconstruct a body?"
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
fix this font error please
"However…"
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
the stone is related to the stone, seems obvious.
"However, it's undeniable that the Illumination Stone is related to the Illumination Stone. The Illumination Sword Formation that you comprehended should be a secret skill that someone comprehended using the Illumination Stone."
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
editor correct please
The divine phoenix bone and secret behind the double immortality and divine phoenix bone would be buried in the Dragon Burial Valley forever alongside Su Zimo's leap!
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
editor correct please.
Su Zimo was long drenched in head and his head was slumped with his black hair raining down - the only thing that could faintly be seen were a pair of frightening eyes!
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
editor please correct
"Dugu Jian, that monster incarnate of Dugu Jian is a beast and isn't human. Are you going to represent the Dugu clan and stand on his side?" Ouyang Xiayu of the ancient aristocratic family asked coldly.
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
is there a reason you can't say trident? need the word count?
Yuwen Wujia was clearly unafraid and retrieved a golden three-pronged spear from his storage bag. It looked extremely heavy and unbefitting with his scrawny size.
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
....how is it a tripod if it has four legs....
The tripod before him was a four-legged square tripod.
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
Anyone else think of the children's book Stella Luna?
"Senior Brother Mo, there's quite a few people from Stellar Luna Sect!"
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
editor, 10000 what?
Even 10,000 after their deaths, the otherworldly soldiers that were conjured maintained their vigilant stance and continued patrolling the palace against enemies!
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
he turned around to leave himself? editor correct please.
Turning around, Su Zimo whisked up the groveling Perfected Being Cang Lang and turned to leave the Su Zimo, heading for his own residence.
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
edit please
The reason why Ethereal Peak lingered so long in Ethereal Peak after the battle was not merely because of him.
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
much longer than what? assume life span.
The good thing was that demons were innately strong from birth and they had a much longer than humans on the same cultivation realm.
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
Review at 40 chapters in. The story itself seems to be developing well. The translation quality is where this novel suffers greatly. Different names and terms used for cultivation levels, names, places, and random tense changes often ruin the flow. Expect MLT with little to no editing.
As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime
Fantasy · Southsky Star