Kinda OP since it would also affect those significantly stronger than him by the 50% decrease in abilities.
Creates a circle with 20m radius of pure, perfect darkness. Enemies are blinded, weakened, and will experience constant damage within this radius. Power escalates with proximity to caster.
Games · NightWind
Run on sentence
My life before I died, could be called an uneventful one, I had no dreams and aspirations, of course apart from being transmigrated to another world, but like that's ever gonna happen, right... I had few friends and the ones I did, I rarely spent time with. My parents wanted me to study hard, get rich and finally get married. Of course, I agreed with them... in the beginning. But I started getting addicted to web novels, light novels and a bunch of other stuff. I would spend hours every day reading away locked away in my room. Neglecting spending time with my family and studying for school.
Anime & Comics · nightRox
You're switching between present and past tense. You said "continued" which is past and then say "tries", which is present.
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Games · MyLittleBrother
No. Same reason as the other 2, it seems a bit forced.
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Anime & Comics · PsychoticTL
If you want a good One Piece FF, I recommend reading "A Gamer in South Blue" by LordVishnu. They recently came back so chapters are being updated again.
The Shinobi of Straw Hats
Anime & Comics · PeekACoo