aqimzan - Profile

Thank you for sharing the chapter of your story. I appreciate the opportunity to read it and provide feedback and I enjoyed the content you presented.

This fanfiction is well-written and entertaining. I anticipate the story's following part to be full of tension and excitement. Everything is fine except the grammar. To put it simply, I believe in you and what you're doing. Do not stop doing what you're doing; your efforts are much appreciated.

The beginning of the story is a bit cringe-worthy, but the story gets better with the new release. I like an overpowered character. So overall, I'm OK with this story.