Badges 6
Moments 8
I think your story would be smoother if you stuck to your main character’s viewpoint and saved these other characters as special inserts in the future
ch 51 Andrea's Decision [(Part-1) out of 4]
Earth's Alpha Prime
Fantasy · MN_1223
Honestly, if something like this was real, I’d get it even if it cost 20 grand. Pay in installments like a car.
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A New World, an immersive game experience
Games · Breuno
All he did was stare at the injured Delia and talk to Blake. Why is Oliver telling Blake to “feed her” instead of telling her directly to drink the tonic? She’s right there and awake.
"Feed her this, it should help with her injuries" Oliver handed a tonic over to Blake before leaving. "Don't worry about the outcome of what you did, I'll settle it" Oliver's voice echoed in the room even after he had left.
Affinity:Chaos
Fantasy · Springs_Halo
Wow... how misogynistic
"She?" Grey was surprised, he didn't think the champion of class three would be a girl.
Affinity:Chaos
Fantasy · Springs_Halo
Ahhh you thought this through! I thought it was a plot hole, but it’s satisfying to know it isn’t
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Earth's Alpha Prime
Fantasy · MN_1223
Damage done to your lungs is usually calculated by how many packs rather than how man years. Ex: if you smoke 1 pack a day for 30 years, youve smoked 30 pack years. if youve smoked 10 packs a day for 3 years, youve smoked 30 pack years.
After five years of smoking, he finally quit two years ago. However, life was a joke. Although he stopped, the damage was already done. He contracted cancer.
I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World
Urban · Pointbreak
1 silver = a months wage for his dad Her earns 35 coppers doing errands for 5 days If 1 silver = 100 copper then hes earnIng double his dads salary doing errands
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Joining the association
LEGENDARY GUARDIAN
Fantasy · Riviz