then after u have fixed all the chaps, I will read them, for now it is the waste of my limited fast pass.
ch 95 Chapter 91: The angel and the demon
Fantasy · LAZYHEAD
bro if i remember correctly then premium chapters can't be edited right?
ch 95 Chapter 91: The angel and the demon
Fantasy · LAZYHEAD
if u want to earn better then u have to do it buddy, just write new chapters and stockpile them for now while editing the previous chapters, after all after getting premium u cannot edit as per other authors who regret.
Lina was the maid who served Shizune until she was five years old. While Lina was taking my body measurements, I learned a lot about Shizune's likes and dislikes. Judging by her appearance, she was probably around 8-10 years old. I secretly prayed for him to have to serve a slut like Shizune at such a young age
Fantasy · OLD_storage
better, but plz repair them before continuing as many will drop bcz of bad quality at the starting chapters
Lina was the maid who served Shizune until she was five years old. While Lina was taking my body measurements, I learned a lot about Shizune's likes and dislikes. Judging by her appearance, she was probably around 8-10 years old. I secretly prayed for him to have to serve a slut like Shizune at such a young age
Fantasy · OLD_storage
then what about all elements bro... u r contradicting ueself
He would be regarded as a Deviant, and there was no point in doing that.
Fantasy · athex
then imagine opening at last page just for curiousity
The last chapter he opened, right before he met his fate on the bus.
Fantasy · athex
before going premium and uploading new chapters review all of the chapters and you just jumped in between scenes in perhaps 2 places so fix it as well. Plz correct the chapters only then move forward
ch 57 Killing four birds with one stone
Fantasy · OLD_storage
use chatgpt, it can be of immense help, tell it to correct the grammatical errors, smooth writing establishment, tone consideration, and make it simple to read not in an extravagant way
Lina was the maid who served Shizune until she was five years old. While Lina was taking my body measurements, I learned a lot about Shizune's likes and dislikes. Judging by her appearance, she was probably around 8-10 years old. I secretly prayed for him to have to serve a slut like Shizune at such a young age
Fantasy · OLD_storage
nope, but might as well make it
Every time I met someone new, someone that I haven't seen before, it felt like my duty to sweet talk them into loving me, adding them into my collection of tens of thousands of simps.
Fantasy · _VA_
what about mosquito souls?
I chuckled, thoroughly enjoying the demon's desperation. "Absolutely not. I'm not letting you run rampant in my body. How about this? I'll summon you, but you won't take control. Instead, I'll offer a soul in your name each time. Deal?"
Fantasy · Allevatore_dicapre
kinda cool
As I forced myself to calm down I observed the power of the demons,my blood instead of flowing outward from my wounds, flew in the air before being pulled towards the demonic figure. It opened its mouth wide and the crimson stream disappeared into its dark depths with an eerie gracefulness. In that moment, everything became clear to me. The words from that forbidden book that Lucas had stumbled upon before destroying the shrine echoed in my mind: "Blood is your domain." This gruesome scene solidified the sinister meaning behind those cryptic words. And yet, I couldn't help but find it strangely mesmerizing. (picture of demon in comments)
Fantasy · Allevatore_dicapre
tftc
ch 48 The White Devil vs The God of Fire [1]
Fantasy · Crypthh
hehe welcome M1st,,, tftc
ch 14 Chapter 14: Hidden Dungeon (7) Towards Azeroth
Fantasy · M1st
tftc
ch 38 Mystic Manifest
Fantasy · AFM31_ALDA
these heroes are whom I hate the most,,, tftc
ch 54 The White Devil and The Hero
Rise of the White Devil
Fantasy · Crypthh