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Story is okay but there are grammatical errors an inconsistency with pronouns. Author needs to get the book edited.

Good story although most if their conflict is due to them not talking to each other, choosing to lie and deliberately cause misunderstanding. Hope there will be a progression in the next novels the author writes.

Too many grammatical issues. It vs its, leon vs leon’s, have you made up your mind vs have you made ypur minds. I can’t take it anymore at 30 chapters. Please have the book edited. Grammatical errors does not add value to the book.

Probably the most disorganized book. It looks more the a draft than a book

Book seems like a volume than a an entire book. There are grammatical errors. I wish the sequel is in web novel too.

Story is okay. It just did not make sense when the vampire princess made the sign of the cross before going inside the hospital room where the Alpha King was. I guess the author is a Catholic. Characters was not as in depth. Also characters seems too fragile and easy to manipulate. The characters seems too tame to be supernaturals. I like happy endings so in the end it was okay. Hunter and Selena would be a good next book to explore.

Book was okay but it is infuriating that the common response to their argument and conflict is running away and keeping secrets. It makes the plot and characters so juvenile.

Is the book really done💀? I feel like there should be more chapters. It is a cliff hanger.

The story is good but it appeats like a volume than an entire book. Makes you wanna read the next book.

It is actually a good book but I did not even dare read the book even it was featured under weekly carnival and daily recommendation. I snubbed it four time because the title is too cringy. Lol. Author has some writing chops and characters are well written. It is just unfortunate that she was not able to finish writing volume three. Seriously, the title does not really add value to the book.

Female lead was consistently annoying at the earlier part of the book. Books is otherwise entertaining.

This book has one of the most annoying female leads. Portrayed as a strong woman but has no capacity to mull over her options. Typical female leads who makes decisions without forethought and a male lead who keeps on keeping secrects causing misunderstanding. Also there are random flashbacks when there is switch of point of view from one character to another.

It’s a good book. I just personally didnot like the FL lettingh her brother make decisions for her.

It is a story where good triumphs over evil. Each obstacle is overcome bythe leads. Story is a bit to linear but its okayif you are into a straightforward storyof good vs evil.

It’s an overtly positive story where the leads get their happy ending. Author needs to watch the pronouns - he and she are enterchanged, she vs he, etc. But needs eduting but is otherwise good.

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It is a good read. It’ll make you want to root for the male and female lead. Background and characters are compelling.

One of the books i really like. I mostly give my gold tickets to this book. While i love the story line, i could not appreciate mistakes and inconsistencies wih names