Robert's rebellion
ch 0 4 Question
Book&Literature · YooJiSeon
vanishing cabinet to hogwarts. time turner to save Hermione
ch 0 9 Chapter 9 Old Wands
Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
thor
needs 1 more go over from the editor
ch 0 4 A Warrior, A Knight and A Thief
Video Games · El_Don
you should have made him older like 12,
'To think my meridians enlarged enough to take me to four star Intermediate Knight'
Fantasy · VOID_
besides that, good story so far...
Sir Fredrick answered with his tone like cowboys who would hit a horse and go "Yee-hah" riding into the sunset.
Fantasy · VOID_
these side comments, while amusing, cause the reader to fall out of the immersion of the story, because Ezra was never from earth, how would he know what a cowboy was or in previous chapter you brought up cell phones
Sir Fredrick answered with his tone like cowboys who would hit a horse and go "Yee-hah" riding into the sunset.
Fantasy · VOID_
please more chapters like thisssss.......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
(Oops. Might have made this one a lil bit long.)
Games · N3wman
need an editor to go through this FF
ch 0 7 Two years of study
Alexandros Peverell-Slytherin
Book&Literature · FanFictionForge