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I'm still baffled how this superhumans/supernatural beings, for all their godlike powers, have the perception of a goldfish when it comes to Mag's apperance. But then superman only put glasses and changed his posture. View More
A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C421
2 days ago
Hum, talk about filler chapter, basically nothing happening. View More
A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C370
3 weeks ago
Time will tell if the cascade effect I spoke about will affect you. To be honest, I didn't read any climax with the MC so far, you're playing around with DxD sandbox - which isn't inherently wrong - but I don't need seat belts or even look at the road to read this, if you understand what mean. Anyways, good that you're planning something.

It's exactly in one of these hiatus that feels that it isn't whothy anymore. Here, it was top 10 fanfic in the power rankings once and read the last chapter, Deja vu, non?.

https://***.webnovel.com/book/14004587005916305

There's a few more, that's why I stand by what I said. View More

Goyya: Hmmm 🤔
This is my first time writing and I really like the pace I'm going.
And I make sure that each Volume has a climax and in the vol that I'm writing now, there will be a big turning point.
As for dropping. I don't really see it unless something drastic happens IRL. At most, I'll be on hiatus for a week or so.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C162
1 month ago
Sigh, I liked the story, but...

...This is going like another fanfic - an Harry Potter in that case - which the author dragged the story to hundred(ish) chapter while still in the first/second arc(book), with fillers, extending arcs and series of chapters with very little content, with no climax related to the main characters. There's no climax for Kisuke in these 162 chapters, no veritable turning point.

Then people start to losing interest here as ** shows, where the feedback is meaninless since the story is more than fifty chapters ahead in the crowd funding platform, which slowly screw things over since the first platform feeds the second. In the end the story ended up dropped.

Sorry about the rant, I've seen this script too many times.
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Playing with other Supernaturals · C162
1 month ago
Pronoum swaps, she instead of he and vice versa in the last few chapters. View More
Second Life of an Assassin and Become a Hero · C12
1 month ago
Usually I was eager for new chapters, but now most of them feels like pseudo fillers, 90% fooling around, 4% plot and 1% progression
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And I don't know math anymore. View More

wheelmann2003: As funny as troll moments are I really didn't need a whole chapter wasted on them followed by one question cliff. No offense just my frustration

Playing with other Supernaturals · C158
1 month ago
It's lame, regressive, backwards, that's what a self nerfing makes me feel for this character. MC is bored and with little purpose and we're bored as well.

Except for that, the story is not bad. View More
Fourth Prince's Debauchery · C11
1 month ago
I'm curious if the chapters are that small in the raws, I mean this feels more like snippets than a proper novel. View More
A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C255
2 months ago
I didn't understand his logic, his cultivation lead to a lot of women and women screwed him, so he decided to not cultivate, but he could do something like cultivating and saying no. View More
Master Of Erossu Book · C1
3 months ago
Chill, pace is an hard skill for experienced authors to master, to balance development and climax points, it's an exercise of creativity and restraint. View More

Goyya: I didn't know it'll take this long either. When I first started I thought that by chp60 I'll be already on Kokabiel's arc, but things I want to add kept coming up, 'This'll be fun.' 'What if it's like this.' 'Did that character reacted properly to that one?' 'Oh, I should add this one.' or something else...

Well, I really like how I'm moving things...

And things will start to speed up as we're done with the initial introductions... I guess... I don't know, really.. I have a rough outline but that's about it.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C64
4 months ago

Goyya: I didn't know it'll take this long either. When I first started I thought that by chp60 I'll be already on Kokabiel's arc, but things I want to add kept coming up, 'This'll be fun.' 'What if it's like this.' 'Did that character reacted properly to that one?' 'Oh, I should add this one.' or something else...

Well, I really like how I'm moving things...

And things will start to speed up as we're done with the initial introductions... I guess... I don't know, really.. I have a rough outline but that's about it.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C64
4 months ago
Yeah, weeks just to introduce Aika to the supernatural world. View More

Race123: It's getting very slow man nothing happened in the chapter. She just walked in the training area and just started running and poof the chapter is over.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C64
4 months ago

Race123: It's getting very slow man nothing happened in the chapter. She just walked in the training area and just started running and poof the chapter is over.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C64
4 months ago
Yeah, RRL even have percentual limit over how much explicit content a story can have, 15% if I remember correctly. View More

FullSilencesSilent: Really?
I read 2 novel with good plot
80% smut
Although end fast.
Good end as well imo

Profane Prince of Domination · C14
4 months ago
It means that some people disregard stories with smut content as subpar because of it, as if we can't have a well weaved plot and explicit content at the same time, usually are reviews in the RRL platform. View More

FullSilencesSilent: U agree with the first part.

About the 2nd one
Lemons break the plot?

Profane Prince of Domination · C14
4 months ago
Sure, I don't mind. I dropped the story, but that doesn't mean I hate it. Started to sound more like pre-teens drama, if this was set in the 4th year and fowards would a lot more engaging for what the author is going for.

Also, I don't like Ginny as character, but the truth is that romance in the HP books are nothing more than the fan's projections, heck Rowling did a mediocre job with it in the books, but she barely care to write more than a few lines about it. View More

AdamNics: So you've dropped, I'm going to continue.
Would you like me to tell you if a certain thing happens or doesn't happen? as the case may be

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
5 months ago
Worst than a weak character is a nerfed one, especially for some random B.S. It's feels regressive or backwards. Despite some readers/authors think, you can write an OP character and keep the audience interested, old comics are an example of that.

Other thant that, my only complain about this novel is the shota vibe, for me anything with sexual content must develop quickly the underage phase. That's just me. View More
Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C49
5 months ago
Well, I actually dropped the story a little after of the review.

The reason is that the author' current focus is to play the emotional card with the pairings - first Hermione, now Ginny - to gather audience and it works. It's a disappointment for people who like HP for what it is and not some cheap "CEO" drama. View More

AdamNics: The story really could be more clear in synopsis of what the story included(though it did say its going to explore magic and path his own way too the future) and been tagged better (or really at all).

The relationships, especially hermione, has been a bit of a mess IMO, though I do think it has gotten better. If the hermione **** repeats one more time, I will probably start disliking this story(and I like it quite a bit).

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
5 months ago
No Mag anymore, it's Souma, since his food is bursting people' clothes. View More
A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C64
5 months ago

Chibi_Senpai: Honestly I still really don’t know what I expected from this novel and what kind of mc the author truly wanted to create. Maybe he’s just trying to please the readers and I truly wish the best but I can finally see this novel is really not for me.
I don’t even remember what made me pick up this novel but I thought it’d be a dark/cold/pragmatic Harry novel. I honestly liked the beginning but things kind of took a downward turn when Hermione was introduced. I still remember the moment something popped up in the back of my mind that I wasn’t going to be able to binge read a hundred chapters. It was when Harry hugged Hermione and got addicted to the warmth. From them I knew it was a wrap and the cool headed stable logical mc was in danger.
Despite the fact that he’d known her less than a year and she was 11 years old, the mc proceeded to get dangerously attached to Hermione even though their ideals couldn’t be more conflicting. I’d originally applauded his decision to groom her into his subordinate as she truly was a gifted witch but I wonder where it went so wrong as the author seemed to heighten his emotions for her when it was obvious how dangerously stupid falling for a little girl was. He taught her and revealed to her a majority of his secrets while her loyalty was never certain. It’s like he deluded himself into thinking it was a sure thing they were going to spend their lives together. Meanwhile she’s just eleven, fickle and easily able to be turned against him.
I don’t know, I blame reader’s obsession with seeing an mc with empathy, ‘human’ emotions, and showing genuine care for those close to him. Maybe it’s just a difference of preference but I disliked how irrational, delusional and emotionally invested he became when it had to do with Hermione. It sometimes felt like the author was inhabiting the mc and was very enamored with Hermione/Emma Watson. I won’t deny it, I can somewhat understand where he’s coming from as I dealt with the same challenges when writing myself but I made sure to separate myself from the mc and try not to show favoritism to a specific female character.
Hermione was originally meant to be a pawn but ended up owning the mc’s very fragile heart and unstable mind. It’s disheartening honestly and a primary reason why I’m dropping this novel. I wanted a cool headed mc who got things done and wasn’t controlled by his dxck or emotions. I’m not really a fan of overly emotional protagonists so I’m just gonna get off the ride while I can after reading 35 chapters. Reading other reviews showed me things don’t really change in future chapters since the author is dead set on Hermione even though their personalities directly clash. And instead of the mc corrupting and subordinating her, she’s ended up doing his head in. He acted irrationally by revealing to her all his secrets and I doubt he’s ever going to really take back control of the relationship. It’s too much angst for a bunch of 11 year olds to be dealing with.
Thus the mc and the story has just turned me off it. No hard feelings, wish the novel the best. I’m out.

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
5 months ago
Especially this kind of chapter, where the title compass the very little that happened in the chapter. View More

LoneSmoker: I really hate that the chapters are always so short...

A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C47
5 months ago
Serious continuity problems.

I'm saying farewell to this novel, it seriously need some tags, like child protagonist, slice of life, extreme slow pace, Hermione-centric. I can't ad aeternum relate 11/12 year old with snail pace progression.

It's just me, some people like it though, but I honestly think that after 60/70ish chapter the novel start losing what it makes interesting in the first place. View More
New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C128
5 months ago
thanks View More

yojire: The quill writes its own script...

Lord of the Mysteries · C471
5 months ago

yojire: The quill writes its own script...

Lord of the Mysteries · C471
5 months ago
Yeah, anyone remember the 0-08 downside? The guy uses it so freely. View More

Aby55: What. The. Fuck. There's almost no limit to this 0-08...

Lord of the Mysteries · C471
5 months ago

guilhermecoimbra: It's like reading a cultivation novel without the nonsense and endless classifications.

Supreme Magus · C15
5 months ago
Well, if you think about. In every modern chinese novel you'll see that, when it comes to governement officials, nepotism, corruption and, above all, traffic of influence, are normal.

But then, politics are a little more than a game of interest, so the reality doesn't change much in the rest of the world. View More

Darthodin: and this is the country that he is proud off and patriotic,chinese logic is so fucking twisted its crazy,the government basically acts like the king and the officials are nobles that can do whatever the **** they want as long as they dont **** with the "king"...and somehow they think this is fine and alright...my god the cultural differences are crazy sometimes

I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C787
5 months ago

Zairys: Is it just me that thinks this is getting really quite bland? I guess i feel the pace is slow... o(╥﹏╥)o

The Irregular In ATG · C23
5 months ago

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New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C126
5 months ago

Necrom: Wow... The chapters are being dragged out... This time as well the author used an entire chapter just to say "Rita Skeeter infiltrated inside Harry's shop and got caught"....

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C126
5 months ago
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