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I'm curious if the chapters are that small in the raws, I mean this feels more like snippets than a proper novel. View More
A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C255
1 week ago
I didn't understand his logic, his cultivation lead to a lot of women and women screwed him, so he decided to not cultivate, but he could do something like cultivating and saying no. View More
Master Of Erossu Book · C1
1 month ago
Chill, pace is an hard skill for experienced authors to master, to balance development and climax points, it's an exercise of creativity and restraint. View More

Goyya: I didn't know it'll take this long either. When I first started I thought that by chp60 I'll be already on Kokabiel's arc, but things I want to add kept coming up, 'This'll be fun.' 'What if it's like this.' 'Did that character reacted properly to that one?' 'Oh, I should add this one.' or something else...

Well, I really like how I'm moving things...

And things will start to speed up as we're done with the initial introductions... I guess... I don't know, really.. I have a rough outline but that's about it.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C64
2 months ago

Goyya: I didn't know it'll take this long either. When I first started I thought that by chp60 I'll be already on Kokabiel's arc, but things I want to add kept coming up, 'This'll be fun.' 'What if it's like this.' 'Did that character reacted properly to that one?' 'Oh, I should add this one.' or something else...

Well, I really like how I'm moving things...

And things will start to speed up as we're done with the initial introductions... I guess... I don't know, really.. I have a rough outline but that's about it.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C64
2 months ago
Yeah, weeks just to introduce Aika to the supernatural world. View More

Race123: It's getting very slow man nothing happened in the chapter. She just walked in the training area and just started running and poof the chapter is over.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C64
2 months ago

Race123: It's getting very slow man nothing happened in the chapter. She just walked in the training area and just started running and poof the chapter is over.

Playing with other Supernaturals · C64
2 months ago
Yeah, RRL even have percentual limit over how much explicit content a story can have, 15% if I remember correctly. View More

FullSilencesSilent: Really?
I read 2 novel with good plot
80% smut
Although end fast.
Good end as well imo

Profane Prince of Domination · C14
2 months ago
It means that some people disregard stories with smut content as subpar because of it, as if we can't have a well weaved plot and explicit content at the same time, usually are reviews in the RRL platform. View More

FullSilencesSilent: U agree with the first part.

About the 2nd one
Lemons break the plot?

Profane Prince of Domination · C14
2 months ago
Sure, I don't mind. I dropped the story, but that doesn't mean I hate it. Started to sound more like pre-teens drama, if this was set in the 4th year and fowards would a lot more engaging for what the author is going for.

Also, I don't like Ginny as character, but the truth is that romance in the HP books are nothing more than the fan's projections, heck Rowling did a mediocre job with it in the books, but she barely care to write more than a few lines about it. View More

AdamNics: So you've dropped, I'm going to continue.
Would you like me to tell you if a certain thing happens or doesn't happen? as the case may be

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
3 months ago
Worst than a weak character is a nerfed one, especially for some random B.S. It's feels regressive or backwards. Despite some readers/authors think, you can write an OP character and keep the audience interested, old comics are an example of that.

Other thant that, my only complain about this novel is the shota vibe, for me anything with sexual content must develop quickly the underage phase. That's just me. View More
Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C49
3 months ago
Well, I actually dropped the story a little after of the review.

The reason is that the author' current focus is to play the emotional card with the pairings - first Hermione, now Ginny - to gather audience and it works. It's a disappointment for people who like HP for what it is and not some cheap "CEO" drama. View More

AdamNics: The story really could be more clear in synopsis of what the story included(though it did say its going to explore magic and path his own way too the future) and been tagged better (or really at all).

The relationships, especially hermione, has been a bit of a mess IMO, though I do think it has gotten better. If the hermione **** repeats one more time, I will probably start disliking this story(and I like it quite a bit).

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
3 months ago
No Mag anymore, it's Souma, since his food is bursting people' clothes. View More
A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C64
3 months ago

Chibi_Senpai: Honestly I still really don’t know what I expected from this novel and what kind of mc the author truly wanted to create. Maybe he’s just trying to please the readers and I truly wish the best but I can finally see this novel is really not for me.
I don’t even remember what made me pick up this novel but I thought it’d be a dark/cold/pragmatic Harry novel. I honestly liked the beginning but things kind of took a downward turn when Hermione was introduced. I still remember the moment something popped up in the back of my mind that I wasn’t going to be able to binge read a hundred chapters. It was when Harry hugged Hermione and got addicted to the warmth. From them I knew it was a wrap and the cool headed stable logical mc was in danger.
Despite the fact that he’d known her less than a year and she was 11 years old, the mc proceeded to get dangerously attached to Hermione even though their ideals couldn’t be more conflicting. I’d originally applauded his decision to groom her into his subordinate as she truly was a gifted witch but I wonder where it went so wrong as the author seemed to heighten his emotions for her when it was obvious how dangerously stupid falling for a little girl was. He taught her and revealed to her a majority of his secrets while her loyalty was never certain. It’s like he deluded himself into thinking it was a sure thing they were going to spend their lives together. Meanwhile she’s just eleven, fickle and easily able to be turned against him.
I don’t know, I blame reader’s obsession with seeing an mc with empathy, ‘human’ emotions, and showing genuine care for those close to him. Maybe it’s just a difference of preference but I disliked how irrational, delusional and emotionally invested he became when it had to do with Hermione. It sometimes felt like the author was inhabiting the mc and was very enamored with Hermione/Emma Watson. I won’t deny it, I can somewhat understand where he’s coming from as I dealt with the same challenges when writing myself but I made sure to separate myself from the mc and try not to show favoritism to a specific female character.
Hermione was originally meant to be a pawn but ended up owning the mc’s very fragile heart and unstable mind. It’s disheartening honestly and a primary reason why I’m dropping this novel. I wanted a cool headed mc who got things done and wasn’t controlled by his dxck or emotions. I’m not really a fan of overly emotional protagonists so I’m just gonna get off the ride while I can after reading 35 chapters. Reading other reviews showed me things don’t really change in future chapters since the author is dead set on Hermione even though their personalities directly clash. And instead of the mc corrupting and subordinating her, she’s ended up doing his head in. He acted irrationally by revealing to her all his secrets and I doubt he’s ever going to really take back control of the relationship. It’s too much angst for a bunch of 11 year olds to be dealing with.
Thus the mc and the story has just turned me off it. No hard feelings, wish the novel the best. I’m out.

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
3 months ago
Especially this kind of chapter, where the title compass the very little that happened in the chapter. View More

LoneSmoker: I really hate that the chapters are always so short...

A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C47
3 months ago
Serious continuity problems.

I'm saying farewell to this novel, it seriously need some tags, like child protagonist, slice of life, extreme slow pace, Hermione-centric. I can't ad aeternum relate 11/12 year old with snail pace progression.

It's just me, some people like it though, but I honestly think that after 60/70ish chapter the novel start losing what it makes interesting in the first place. View More
New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C128
3 months ago
thanks View More

yojire: The quill writes its own script...

Lord of the Mysteries · C471
3 months ago

yojire: The quill writes its own script...

Lord of the Mysteries · C471
3 months ago
Yeah, anyone remember the 0-08 downside? The guy uses it so freely. View More

Aby55: What. The. Fuck. There's almost no limit to this 0-08...

Lord of the Mysteries · C471
3 months ago

guilhermecoimbra: It's like reading a cultivation novel without the nonsense and endless classifications.

Supreme Magus · C15
3 months ago
Well, if you think about. In every modern chinese novel you'll see that, when it comes to governement officials, nepotism, corruption and, above all, traffic of influence, are normal.

But then, politics are a little more than a game of interest, so the reality doesn't change much in the rest of the world. View More

Darthodin: and this is the country that he is proud off and patriotic,chinese logic is so fucking twisted its crazy,the government basically acts like the king and the officials are nobles that can do whatever the **** they want as long as they dont **** with the "king"...and somehow they think this is fine and alright...my god the cultural differences are crazy sometimes

I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C787
3 months ago

Zairys: Is it just me that thinks this is getting really quite bland? I guess i feel the pace is slow... o(╥﹏╥)o

The Irregular In ATG · C23
3 months ago

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New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C126
3 months ago

Necrom: Wow... The chapters are being dragged out... This time as well the author used an entire chapter just to say "Rita Skeeter infiltrated inside Harry's shop and got caught"....

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C126
3 months ago
I remember that was a HP/Game of thrones Crossover in the FF - God-King of Essos or something like that. It's dropped or hiatus if I don't remember correctly - Don't remember the author,
Seek for noodlehammer in the FF net, he made this fanfic which use runes over the skin like 'sun', 'moon' and different powers, it's just awesome and one of the best HP - out of a million - fanfic on that platform. View More

Nounouter: Do you have the name of the novel pls

Harry Potter and the darkness · C34
3 months ago

MadForceOfKrieg: That sounds quite awesome, the possibility depends on how the lore of the world is presented.

Harry Potter and the darkness · C34
3 months ago

Rad: There was another novel where the mc transplanted a heart string in his hand bones , Phoenix feather in his ribs , Thunderbird feather in his legs and fused a dementor spine with his and essentially was able to use reinforcement from nasuverse.

Harry Potter and the darkness · C34
3 months ago
I read this novel once which Harry did a ritual to integrate his wand to one of his phalange bones and similar wand to the other hand... food for thought. View More
Harry Potter and the darkness · C34
3 months ago
I'm curious to read what will write. Please keep doing the good job. View More
Slayer of Babylon · C24
3 months ago
That's a very shallow excuse. I mean he kidnapped public officers and isn't like HP can't do things in the shadows. Besides, he could taken the house in that duel. He's alive 'cause author wants to drag the plot. View More

StormKingOTHRoad: Lucious Malfoy is to high profile to kidnap.

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C124
3 months ago
While I'm a critic of the story slow pace, I like the writting. However, it's this thing with Hermione that's slowly killing it and pushing readers away. These daily novels needs a constant audience, otherwise authors lose interest and drop it. Even a blind man can see that's what's happening here. View More

ratuzin: Was Hermione cute when she was 11-12 years old? wtf i think the author fell in love (could i call this a true love?) with a fictional character... i advise looking for a psychologist to talk to before it brings you serious psychological issues....

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C124
3 months ago
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