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  • YE XIU 5.29

    Participated in Ye Xiu's 5.29 birthday event

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  • Wrath of the Black Dragon

    Wrath of the Black Dragon

    Magical Realism

    In his former life, Hei Long reached the ultimate peak of martial arts, ready to ascend beyond his own planet. However, in his most vulnerable state he was struck down by his own companions who had come with him his whole journey. 100 years later, he is reborn, as a heavenly dragon. This time however, he was back with a vengeance. Note: Release rate: Unreliable (What did you expect from a potato?) Also, I really need a thumbnail, found one off of the internet.

  • War of Webnovel(s)

    War of Webnovel(s)

    Realistic Fiction

    "Leader, what should we do, the Best Girl Army has found a new Best Girl!" - Noob A "Analyze her weaknesses and release them on the webnovel forums!" My name is Chung Ho and I am the "proud" leader of the Anti-Harem-Alliance. Over the past years, The AHA has declined in favor of the BGA(Best Girl Army) or the IHU(International Harem Union). I represent all the people who's hopes and dreams have been crushed by the BGA or the IHU. Note: This whole book is a joke. Tee-hee

Moments

mr6: Honestly i was enjoying this book but you messed up bro. If you're gonna be this greedy, as to charge me 1000 spirit stones to read 2 new chapters with this privileged reader bull****, I'm just gonna stop reading. What's the point of locking 50 chapters that were free yesterday and asking people to pay 1000 spirit stones to read them again. What was wrong with just charging 10 spirit stones for every new chapter. Regardless your excessive greed has made you lose me, and undoubtably many other people as readers. Especially as I'm sure you know, nearly all books on webnovel are published illegally and free to read on other sites.

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator · C99
2 days ago

Protozoanthrope: So you're giving us nonsense such as reading privilege by paying 500 spirit stone for 5 chapters which is literally 100 SS for 1 chapter, now that's a new kind of greed. so FUCK YOU 🖕🖕🖕

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator · C53
3 days ago
Nice. View More
Master of Time · C36
1 week ago

Senior_Nepuko: Those abilities aren't absolute. You remember Soi Fon's famous "2 Stings Kill" right? He tried that on Aizen, guess what? It didn't work. Why? Cuz he was stronger than her in Spiritual Pressure.
We'd like to avoid No Limit Fallacy here.

Rebirth in Bleach · C63
1 week ago

F1nal: Draco felt so pathetic in this fight it was cringeworthy.

Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C48
1 week ago

Rishiraj: He is getting more and more pathetic.
If he is the protagonist of the story then portray him as such, deliberate undermining him makes it all the more irrelevant .

Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C48
1 week ago

The_Preto: Yes... MC has trained for YEARS even has good talent and the knows the F**CKING FUTURE ...

Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C48
1 week ago

SuperNova681: I have seen no proof of Captain America being physically stronger than Spider-man. Cap is stated to be at peak human level, where as Spider-Man is straight up Super-human. If you want proof of Spidey's superiority, there is a point in time where he held up the Daily Bugle by himself. Cap has struggled to beat people at his own level of strength.

The Speedster with The System · C0
1 week ago

Jobbles: Thanks for information but I cried tiers of blood when I learned it’s not a real chapter

Rebirth in Bleach · C61
1 week ago

bloo: Not a single one of the people you listed have a personality that would be cool with a harem. Wtf? Soi Fon likes Yoruichi, and Yoruichi is way older than Itsuki. If anything she sees him as a kid. Why ruin a perfectly good story with a thoughtless harem

Rebirth in Bleach · C45
1 week ago

Pripriri: What part is hilarious? Your face or the novel?

I Might Be A Fake Cultivator
1 week ago

Asmodai216: Writing Quality: Trash tier. The grammar is awful, you can tell the writer isn't a native English speaker. It's legible, you can understand it, but a 5 minute spelling and grammar check on each chapter isn't too much to ask for.

Stability of Updates: The author Seion writes a bunch of different system based stories and updates all of them with great frequency. This is great as far as updating the story goes, but it seriously detracts from the quality of the story. An author churning out multiple updates a day for different stories will end up suffering when it comes to quality and foresight.

Story Development: Like a lot of the sub-standard wish fulfillment series on this site, the pacing of the story is very quick. Characters who should gradually build up a relationship with others are instead instantly won over for no real reason, and a bunch of plot points are not thought out well... Whatsoever... At all.

Character Design: The MC we're given is freaking ridiculous. I personally appreciate an MC I can relate to, but I usually like an MC that has a fleshed out character. This MC fails to react with anything resembling common sense, decency, caution, or any other reasonable character trait. For fucks sake, in chapter 8 he literally molests a goddess and goes on to say that he likes things to be consensual.

Speaking of, the characters from the series are massively OOC with no real explanation given. Sure, some basic traits are there, but they are railroaded onto whatever path the author wants with no explanation other than, "Hurr durr, Hestia is cute, I don't care if she's a virgin goddess who only fell for the pure-hearted Bell after he spent months earnestly supporting her, I want her to get with my supah awesome MC." I don't even care if he stole her from Bell, just make it actually make some damn sense.

Then there are the background characters who just go along with this complete bull****.

World Background: The only reason this is getting 2 stars is because of the ALREADY FUNCTIONING world provided by virtue of being FANFICTION. Frankly, the additions made regarding the system, the MCs abilities, and his self-insert into an adventurer's body make no goddamn sense whatsoever.

"Hey Eina, I'm already level 3 despite not being in a familia. It doesn't matter that even having a level at all requires someone to have a falna, I'm supah aweshome and you'll totally believe me"

"I've never been apart of a familia, even though the body I took over was actually apart of one before I got here."

Summary: This is a pretty standard work for the author, Seion. Crappy grammar, characters and powers that don't make any damn sense. Railroading into relationships that don't make any damn sense from the chicks standpoint. Generic crappy wish-fulfillment fanfic is trash.

Dungeon System Within DanMachi
1 week ago
I’m not going to lie, probably dropping because of this chapter. View More
Curse the Mainframe! · C38
1 week ago

Slesk: Why is your Gaara so weak? I get that he is really strong compared to others around his age group but that shouldn't be close. Gaara killed who knows how many ninja in assassination attempts against him yet he never had any of them really get past his Sand Shield or whatever. His sand was also incredibly fast with barely any effort on his part or training for that matter. I get that you gotta nerf him lest he goes around killing Jounin left and right, but you have given no explanation as to why he is so weak. Maybe is because this version is less influenced by his Tailed Beast, or maybe this one doesn't have his Moms spirit protection thingy, or maybe he thinks too much, you really should just give a reason why Gaara is so much lesser than his Source Material counterpart.

Gaara · C20
1 week ago

ElizabetB: please do not make draco have bad grades or be ordinary to lay low. please, there is nothing wrong in him having good grades and be a genius.

Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C44
2 weeks ago
Them being all epic tier really defeats the purpose of epic tier. Hooray, his guildies are epic tier. Come on, at this point, a preschooler could get epic tier. View More
The Sword Path · C18
2 weeks ago

Immortal_Potato: Wait 300B?!?! Now he is like the strongest person we have ever seen so far. Even the tribulation lightning thunderbolt was just 1B. His minotaur friend? 400M. He should be off to ascend at this point.

Trope World · C30
2 weeks ago
Wait 300B?!?! Now he is like the strongest person we have ever seen so far. Even the tribulation lightning thunderbolt was just 1B. His minotaur friend? 400M. He should be off to ascend at this point. View More
Trope World · C30
2 weeks ago

Immortal_Potato: Maybe he can be like a one armed warrior god. In Desolate Era there was an ancient fiendgod that refused to regrow his arm (fun fact: that was Ji Ning's master, Daoist Starseizer). So having one arm can be pretty bada*s.

Trope World · C29
2 weeks ago
Maybe he can be like a one armed warrior god. In Desolate Era there was an ancient fiendgod that refused to regrow his arm (fun fact: that was Ji Ning's master, Daoist Starseizer). So having one arm can be pretty bada*s. View More
Trope World · C29
3 weeks ago

krill: Try using grammaly. It gives me good grades for my english in college, so should improve the gramma quite a bit.

Prince of Asgard Orion
3 weeks ago

Tarhanis: Grammar s*ck can t read this
Please there is a lot of free software with wich you can verify, check and so improve your gramma. Because with this state I can t really read it/ understand it easily...

Prince of Asgard Orion
3 weeks ago

Immortal_Potato: I couldn’t really get that far because of the grammar. I mean I don’t know that much about the story but the grammar is really off putting. If the author put a little time into editing and polishing his work, then maybe more people would read it. Unfortunately, as it stands, it is a little unpalatable.

Asura [Bleach]
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C1
I couldn’t really get that far because of the grammar. I mean I don’t know that much about the story but the grammar is really off putting. If the author put a little time into editing and polishing his work, then maybe more people would read it. Unfortunately, as it stands, it is a little unpalatable. View More
Asura [Bleach]
3 weeks ago

Immortal_Potato: WAIT HOLDUP! The math does not add up! The mainframe said 900 bad reviews then the guy added 114 bad reviews making 1014, not 10014.

Curse the Mainframe! · C1
3 weeks ago
WAIT HOLDUP! The math does not add up! The mainframe said 900 bad reviews then the guy added 114 bad reviews making 1014, not 10014. View More
Curse the Mainframe! · C1
3 weeks ago
I’m sorry I can’t understand your poor grammar? Did you have a tragic accident involving your brain when you where a child? I’m sorry, I didn’t know that you had mental problems. View More

Daoist198784: why? how did life hurt you, that you are angry at all? that you beat a lot in childhood?

The Origin Emperor · C1
4 weeks ago

Immortal_Potato: “Oh let me just go and post all my favorite stories here which will greatly benefit Qidian and hurt translators in the long run. How fun! I love working for Webnovel for free and hurting translators livelihoods while illegally copying the hard work of translators!”
-unsealed Faye

The rights held/reserved by translators are important, this is why w*xiaworld and qidian had a battle over it. It’s also why w*xiaworld took down it’s korean translations, out of respect for Korean authors. Now look at you, a malnourished shoe goblin taking others work and posting it on webnovel.

Martial Emperor
4 weeks ago

Immortal_Potato: “Oh let me just go and post all my favorite stories here which will greatly benefit Qidian and hurt translators in the long run. How fun! I love working for Webnovel for free and hurting translators livelihoods while illegally copying the hard work of translators!”
-unsealed Faye

The rights held/reserved by translators are important, this is why w*xiaworld and qidian had a battle over it. It’s also why w*xiaworld took down it’s korean translations, out of respect for Korean authors. Now look at you, a malnourished shoe goblin taking others work and posting it on webnovel.

Martial Emperor
4 weeks ago
“Oh let me just go and post all my favorite stories here which will greatly benefit Qidian and hurt translators in the long run. How fun! I love working for Webnovel for free and hurting translators livelihoods while illegally copying the hard work of translators!”
-unsealed Faye

The rights held/reserved by translators are important, this is why w*xiaworld and qidian had a battle over it. It’s also why w*xiaworld took down it’s korean translations, out of respect for Korean authors. Now look at you, a malnourished shoe goblin taking others work and posting it on webnovel. View More

_UNSEALED_FATE_: Because some people prefer to read novels on webnovel.plus I'm not taking credit for anything

Martial Emperor
4 weeks ago
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