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Great story, the main character plays multiple characters, but still feels like all his characters are not yet complete. Also the story feels like its not done yet, hopefully book two can continue the story.

I really enjoyed this book, and the main character's development, but it could do better at developing it's side characters better. Also, I feel that ghe ending was rushed.

Great adventure story, but the story ended too quickly, as character still has at least 3 Moore stages of cultivation to go through.

Good story layout and character development.

A very interesting story and ideas.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]