_AiRen_

16h

Posted

This novel is worth my time. Truly enjoyed the work. The concept is exciting and gives you wonderful experience throughout with a unique plotline that is so well constructed and finely executed. About the character development if you ask me they are well tailored with lots of unique charms attracting the readers massively each holding an individual importance. The dialogues are humorously designed pertaining to romance, mystery and adventure. The novel has great potential. Good job author!

_AiRen_

17h

Commented

Unbeknownst to him, Nyx was awake and mused, 'He had a strange expression when I asked him to stay here... Did I say something wrong?'

To Kalani's surprise though, the smoke children had also noticed the crowd of people below them and momentarily stilled, but then their blank faces contorted into jeering smiles, as if reveling in the slaves's misery before finally dissipating.

Memories Like a Dagger

Fantasy · SolAce

_AiRen_

18h

Commented

The dead souls?

To Kalani's surprise though, the smoke children had also noticed the crowd of people below them and momentarily stilled, but then their blank faces contorted into jeering smiles, as if reveling in the slaves's misery before finally dissipating.

Memories Like a Dagger

Fantasy · SolAce

_AiRen_

18h

Commented

Who is calling?

'Is Dad calling me?...' Kalani mused for a moment before continuing to wash himself, 'Nah, must be my imagination.'

Memories Like a Dagger

Fantasy · SolAce

_AiRen_

18h

Commented

Goodness!

Not wasting any more time, he pulled out a bandanna from his side pocket and wrapped the bird into a burrito— extra tight. Whistle attempted to extricate itself but to no avail, so it feigned a faint, hoping that he would loosen the fabric.

Memories Like a Dagger

Fantasy · SolAce

_AiRen_

18h

Replied to Webnovel_Author

Thanks for the engagement!

The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!

Fantasy Romance · _AiRen_

_AiRen_

1d

Commented

Sitting in its nest, the bird tried to distract itself with its grooming, but despite its best attempts, its beady eyes would eventually gravitate at the last place where it saw the boy. As if waiting for him to return...

Memories Like a Dagger

Fantasy · SolAce

_AiRen_

1d

Commented

Shrilling aggrievedly, the baby bird eventually managed to stop when it collided into a soft clump of flowering dandelions nearby. Taking a glimpse at itself, the nestling then puffed up its chest in frustration. The feathers it had preened to perfection had been ruined!

Memories Like a Dagger

Fantasy · SolAce

_AiRen_

1d

Commented

The faint pressure on his forehead forced him to slowly glance upward, and as he focused on the hazy black, those curious, beady eyes came into full view. Locking eyes with the fluffy being, he let out a groan and abruptly rolled over, which sent it tumbling into the grass.

Memories Like a Dagger

Fantasy · SolAce

_AiRen_

1d

Commented

But that's where the rest of them are. That's where I am: a human who walks on a fine line between insanity and rationality.

Memories Like a Dagger

Fantasy · SolAce

_AiRen_

1d

Posted

The novel is worth my time. The plotline construction is well written and concept is there. The characters are descriptively sketched out highlighting their importance. The dialogues are humorously incorporated while the narrative is creatively balanced out. Now the flaws that needs to be taken care of : The grammatical errors here and there needs taken care of. There are some auto correct errors I found along my course of read. (nothing major, they are a hassle I know XD) I'll just go ahead give my usual 5 stars encouragement. Hehe thank you! ^o^ Good job author!

THE DEVIL SON IN LAW

Martial Arts · Authors_Novelist

_AiRen_

1d

Commented

How are the inverted commas so different , I mean one is down and the other up? "..." , <-- i meant this.

He presses down the confirmation key, light character reappears: „Do you determine really?"

THE DEVIL SON IN LAW

Martial Arts · Authors_Novelist

_AiRen_

1d

Commented

Haha

Chen Rui, in myriad otaku army, the 24 year, after college is unemployed, did not open a shop easily, can get by reluctantly, was still No house, No car, No girlfriend Three Noes People.

THE DEVIL SON IN LAW

Martial Arts · Authors_Novelist

_AiRen_

1d

Posted

The novel is worth my time. Truly enjoyed the work. The plotline is humorously designed pertaining to schemes, adventure, cool dynamics, actions and mysteries. The concept is exciting and gives you wonderful experience! The characters are descriptively tailored with unique traits carrying individual importance. The dialogues are humorously incorporated and further adds in flavour to the plotline. The world building is well progressing as well. Nice work author! 👍

Gambit of the Living Weapon

Fantasy · Breno_Ranyere

_AiRen_

2d

Commented

Marceus then lifted his crying face at stared at her with disbelief "What did you say...? ...You were the one who killed me...?"

Gambit of the Living Weapon

Fantasy · Breno_Ranyere

_AiRen_

2d

Commented

Woa

Ria started to shine with silver light for a few seconds until the light slowly started to fade. The group focused their attention on Ria and could not understand what had happened. Ria's skin had completely turned into some kind of metallic material similar to Marceus's armor form.