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Xisaro: This is why I keep arguing against using the dragon balls for everything. This story has no ******* anymore. I might come back if I got nothing else to read but this isn't a priority for me anymore. It's a shame because it was really interesting at the start. The abridged characters are also annoying.

I am Krillin! · C16
3 weeks ago

HKG: Come on man, if you ever make a love kalan x bulma im dropping this **** i want the mkst beautiful woman in dbz and that is android 18.

The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World · C69
3 weeks ago

HKG: Come on men if you ever make a love kalan x bulma im dropping this **** i want the mkst beautiful woman in dbz and that is android 18.

The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World · C69
3 weeks ago
Kinda ruined Vegeta's chance at redemption View More
The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World · C68
3 weeks ago
I don't know why tens ion was censored View More

Xisaro: This is why I keep arguing against using the dragon balls for everything. This story has no ******* anymore. I might come back if I got nothing else to read but this isn't a priority for me anymore. It's a shame because it was really interesting at the start. The abridged characters are also annoying.

I am Krillin! · C16
3 weeks ago
This is why I keep arguing against using the dragon balls for everything. This story has no ******* anymore. I might come back if I got nothing else to read but this isn't a priority for me anymore. It's a shame because it was really interesting at the start. The abridged characters are also annoying. View More
I am Krillin! · C16
3 weeks ago
I know this is really late for this series but 18 is the hottest of all dbz wives and has the best attitude. View More
The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World · C64
3 weeks ago

Knkspl: I don't want it, let's go full human to the end. Thanks for the chapter!

I am Krillin! · C13
4 weeks ago

ChenXian: I Don't want asura mode

I am Krillin! · C13
4 weeks ago
was interested until the system... wish you luck with the story. I'm out View More
Yamcha new fangs · C1
4 weeks ago
Reading Status: C23
I really like this DBZ fan fic. I like that the MC doesn't use the dragon balls at least not yet but is working with what he has. He is training and exploring ki techniques. It is a little convenient that the first thing he tries gets the exact results that he wants but at least he kinda discussed it with Roshi before he tried it. I kinda wish he was exploring and learning different martial arts and integrating them instead of mostly relying on his previous life's style so heavily but it's not a big deal.

Every once in awhile the sentence structure and word choice can be a little confusing but i can generally work out the meaning on my second read in those situations. The character interactions can be a bit stiff and awkward but it hasn't ruined anything yet.

Love interest hasn't really come up so i have no idea if it's going to be harem or if romance is even going to be a thing. 18 is always the best and only choice in my opinion. I generally like Krillin though so i'm conflicted. A lot of people chose Bulma but i think Vegeta is the only one that can handle and match her b*tchiness.

It's been awhile since the last update as far as i can tell. if it's not at least once a week or even once a month i can't give a ringing endorsement for stability of updates. View More
Dragon ball: The legend of human
4 weeks ago
Grin - simile broadly, especially in an unrestrained manner and with the mouth open.

When I googled grin that's the definition I just got. View More

Sketchy_Black: Mostly agree but a smile is showing teeth while a grin usually doesn't

Ron Weasley: A Noble's Ascension · C63
4 weeks ago
By the time they get to frieza he will be at Cell's' level. I'm not done yet but I'm not as enamored with the series as I was at the beginning. Plus all of his different power up techniques are starting to grate on my nerves View More

LazyBear: I agree that there isn't really a sense of urgency but I believe it will probably spike on the freeza saga, but that's going to take a while so I dunno. Keep up the good work anymways

I am Krillin! · C12
4 weeks ago
😐 thanks for the chapter but my enthusiasm is waning. I'm not really feeling any threat or urgency from anything. He literally watched on the sidelines until he felt emotionally motivated to do something then basically one shot king piccolo. Then he was all like "I have a tortured past" which I didn't really buy into. Maybe I'm over exaggerating but that kinda how I felt. And please no Ashura form that just not necessary. View More
I am Krillin! · C12
4 weeks ago
I mean... why do anything then? View More

Kurumi523: The mc really wasted his wishes... if i am krillin..
The first thing i need to do before summoning shenron and asking for the wish. Is to get a piece of paper and write all the wishes you want and said.... shenron grant me my wish.. make it real and true all the content of this paper....

1. GETTING STRONGER EVERY SECOND BOTH BODY AND SOUL JUST BY EXISTING
2. NO LIMITS IN THE BODY.
3. 1 IN INFINITY TALENT THROUGHOUT THE MULTIVERSE *DBZ UNIVERSES OF COURSE*
4. ABLE TO MANIPULATE DNA STRANDS OF EVERTYTHING AND CAN INCORPORATE IT TO MY BODY...
5. CAN BE ABLE TO GROW STRONGER BY ABSORBING THE LIGHT OF THE STARS (SUPERMAN REFERENCE HAHAHA)
6.
7.
SO ON
that how to make a wish

I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
His godspeed feels more like magic than technique... View More

Xisaro: I don't know why but I'm not super interested in him learning magic. I'm trying to think of applications that I really liked but besides being able to create a few things like clothes I can't really think of anything. All the cool stuff where techniques like instant transmission. I guess whis did some cool things but that had alot to do with time.

I am Krillin! · C11
1 month ago
I don't know why but I'm not super interested in him learning magic. I'm trying to think of applications that I really liked but besides being able to create a few things like clothes I can't really think of anything. All the cool stuff where techniques like instant transmission. I guess whis did some cool things but that had alot to do with time. View More
I am Krillin! · C11
1 month ago
i could live with the training technique but i feel like it would be cooler if he invented his own style View More

Xisaro: Thanks for the chapter. I still vote limitless Hyperbolic Time Chamber with all martial arts library. But if its between the option you mentioned i would go for the memory. Talent feels kinda vague for me and i really want him to work with what he's got. His healing is already feeling op and i thought it kinda breaks all his limits anyway just not as fast as zenkai.

I am Krillin! · C11
1 month ago
Thanks for the chapter. I still vote limitless Hyperbolic Time Chamber with all martial arts library. But if its between the option you mentioned i would go for the memory. Talent feels kinda vague for me and i really want him to work with what he's got. His healing is already feeling op and i thought it kinda breaks all his limits anyway just not as fast as zenkai. View More
I am Krillin! · C11
1 month ago
Sry to the author for blowing up your comment section with debate essays View More
I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
Oh, forgot to address this point: I'm pretty sure his limits and potential caps were removed with the healing ability wish. View More

Scientistx: Well first of all super soldier is not broken at all compared to saiyans

second of all krilin is still working extremly hard plus the genetic upgrade will not make things easier he would still struggle against likes of friza,hit,bersus, whis ext even goku was a push over after all the training

3 third of all no one has a riğht to complain to krillin for saying fu ck you too fate
World is a unfair place and fate is a ass hole since no one is born equal so it's only Krillins natural riğht to fiğht against the fate and slap it by removing his innate limits and potential caps

If you think goku has a riğht to be a fuc king broken genius than it doesn't make it fair

it is only fair that krillin has riğht to retaliate back

I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
You are probably right that it's not as broken as saiyans. His current healing factor is probably more broken in my opinion.

I agree he is working hard but why waste the wish if it doesn't really change his situation. I would argue that it would make his training easier, it would probably make him smarter, and if i recall correctly you would like it to make him an adonis. Those are all pretty nice but his training is already a lot easier with the healing, he is already pretty talented, he got 18 to marry him (while he was a midget) so looks aren't really an issue for him. Krillin is pretty awesome already.

your third point is kinda... well I'll try to address it but this sounds more like a personal outlook kinda thing. Anybody has the right to complain about anything they want but it doesn't mean anything is obligated to change. The world isn't fair... everybody knows that. It's everybody's right(free will) to fight or not fight for a better place in the world. 'Fate' is just a hand of cards your dealt and they don't change by being mad at them. Krillin was dealt a really good hand considering he has the dragon balls as an option. He is not retaliating against fate by using the dragon balls that is literally the hand that fate dealt him. As for Goku... i mean, you already said that the world is unfair. Goku has a pretty good starting point and it is also his right to fight for his best outcome, i don't understand why you have a problem with this.

Overall Krillin or anybody could literally wish for almost any problem to be solved till they are at the ultimate starting point but it doesn't make for a compelling story or journey. I think him and his rivals are about in the same weight class and I'm ready for a good fight. View More

Scientistx: Well first of all super soldier is not broken at all compared to saiyans

second of all krilin is still working extremly hard plus the genetic upgrade will not make things easier he would still struggle against likes of friza,hit,bersus, whis ext even goku was a push over after all the training

3 third of all no one has a riğht to complain to krillin for saying fu ck you too fate
World is a unfair place and fate is a ass hole since no one is born equal so it's only Krillins natural riğht to fiğht against the fate and slap it by removing his innate limits and potential caps

If you think goku has a riğht to be a fuc king broken genius than it doesn't make it fair

it is only fair that krillin has riğht to retaliate back

I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
Complaining? Are we having the same conversation? You can have whatever preference you want, the super soldier thing has it's own interesting aspects but in general I do not prefer him to use a wish to make it easier to do something he can already do. I like stories where the MC has to struggle while putting in the time and effort to be strong.

Also, I said nothing about being okay or not with Goku, but if you want to discuss that then Goku never wished for better anything. He is a broken genius saiyan but he puts in the effort and works with what he has. For me, the interesting thing about this story is that Krillin is a talented human and trying to match the broken saiyans. I voted for the healing factor because it puts him on a similar starting line as the saiyans without really changing his base power. plus the eternal youth is a must. he already has everything he needs so why waste a wish on super genes.

Sorry if you feel like i'm lecturing, i just like discussing the different merits and directions this cool story can go. You haven't really made a convincing point to me why you think super genes is the most interesting way the story could progress or even why you think my time chamber upgrade idea is not interesting. We both want this story to be awesome so we both make our case and the author can decide to completely ignore us. View More

Scientistx: You are complaining about me saying stuff like this which is not even overboard but you are not complaining about how broken goku is I see??????

Biased I say go lecture about saiyans being broken before complaining about super peak human's

I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
I said nothing about hybridizing anything. with his last wish he has everything he needs to be the strongest its just a matter of time, effort and experience. he basically already uncapped his limit. super soldier is just a small power shortcut, cosmetic upgrade, maybe it increases his talent (even though he is probably one of the most talented humans and he has all the time in the world with that last wish). if he upgrades the hyperbolic time chamber with no limit to uses and a library of every martial art and technique he can abuse the hell out of his eternal youth and get really skilled. He will have earned it too.

Going forward he shouldn't make anymore changes to his body in my opinion. Plus his body can probably now adapt to kaioken to the level of super saiyan whatever and that's not factoring god qi. View More

Scientistx: Fake worries in animes and games mc always go throuğh evolutions do you see them have personality change?????

Nope!!!!!!!!he will be fin plus super soldier transformation focuses on evolution of human genes not hybirdizing with another one

I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago

Lee_christmas25: Why bother with all of this, as long as he can access to god ki he’ll be even stronger than super Saiyan not to mention ultra instinct not only limited to saiyan race. And the whole jawline and cheakbone are completely unnecessary, this is dragon ball who fucking care???

I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
The perfect technique just given to him means he never has to expand his knowledge base. Making his own technique requires a higher understanding of martial arts and will help him grow. Please don't give him max cheat codes. i know i said he was becoming one punch man but it was just a joke. View More
I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago

Xisaro: I would like to see him make and refine his training and technique by himself, asking shenron to do it for him doesn't feel kosher. Maybe have shenron lift the time limit on the hyperbolic time chamber so he can stay in there as long as he wants now that he doesn't age past his prime. He could spend 100 years coming up with his perfect technique and it would be completely his own work. While he is upgrading the time chamber have shenron put in a library with all martial arts and techniques. DBZ is about training and overcoming your limits not wishing your way there. His last wish can be considered as getting him to the starting line allowing him to compete with the Saiyans.

I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
The idea of 18 calling him old man when she finds out is hilarious to me View More

Xisaro: I would like to see him make and refine his training and technique by himself, asking shenron to do it for him doesn't feel kosher. Maybe have shenron lift the time limit on the hyperbolic time chamber so he can stay in there as long as he wants now that he doesn't age past his prime. He could spend 100 years coming up with his perfect technique and it would be completely his own work. While he is upgrading the time chamber have shenron put in a library with all martial arts and techniques. DBZ is about training and overcoming your limits not wishing your way there. His last wish can be considered as getting him to the starting line allowing him to compete with the Saiyans.

I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
As far as the magic goes, you have to be a 30year old virgin so... Not viable if he still wants 18. View More
I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
I would like to see him make and refine his training and technique by himself, asking shenron to do it for him doesn't feel kosher. Maybe have shenron lift the time limit on the hyperbolic time chamber so he can stay in there as long as he wants now that he doesn't age past his prime. He could spend 100 years coming up with his perfect technique and it would be completely his own work. While he is upgrading the time chamber have shenron put in a library with all martial arts and techniques. DBZ is about training and overcoming your limits not wishing your way there. His last wish can be considered as getting him to the starting line allowing him to compete with the Saiyans. View More
I am Krillin! · C10
1 month ago
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