noobiewhale

3yr

Replied to DEFCON_ONE

doesnt this already exist? pretty sure it has about 2000 translated chapters

Human Emperor

Fantasy · DEFCON_ONE

noobiewhale

3yr

Posted

I hate these types of novels. It’s eastern fantasy but it feels like magical realism. The lack of creativity bothers me. The overuse of cliche situations to make the lead seem cool are annoying. The author is also a convenient writer as i would say, they dont plan out situations that well and add random things later. For example first he tells how the lead kills someone, later when he is in danger he suddenly uses an item the writer never told us about and than he says that the lead picked up the item from the guy he killed. It shows poor writing skills and thats exactly what happens in this book a lot.

My Summons Can Learn Skills

Eastern · Yuqiao Watches the Sea

noobiewhale

3yr

Commented

i still dont get the story, its eastern fantasy but he goes to different worlds with different timelines?? does everyone else also have a system? or how would they know what their attributes are. furthermore the author uses a lot of cliche scenarios which make the lead seem very cool all of a sudden??

ch 10 Giving Someone a Taste of His Own Medicine

My Summons Can Learn Skills

Eastern · Yuqiao Watches the Sea

noobiewhale

3yr

Commented

this is such a basic way of writing nowadays, seems more like an original work instead of a translated one. I especially dislike the foreshadowing in the last paragraph