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No

It’s enjoyable but at the same time feels a bit fast. If I’m not mistaken don’t withers have a long lifespan if they don’t die to monsters or people. If that is the case I do look forward to see how you introduce a love/romantic interest but do not go harem. I would question why give shape of all people the knowledge and materials for potions that will more than likely be used against him and his allies? After all that I do honestly enjoy it keep it up.

His name is Marco the Phoenix

It’s called a phoenix

No

Thanks for the chapters so far. Since you are making this a multi verse one I’m gonna leave. Good luck!

Where be the pictu res

Can you make it an auxiliary chapter because I keep getting happy there’ s another chapter but low and behold troop numbers

Yes

You do know X - Men are marvel right?

Magma would be nice. Lightning is over used

Good start! I am going to stop reading now because I grow tired of harem writings. Please update your tags to include harem so others do not read without fully knowing what they are getting into.

Why it’ a good read

It was good while it lasted by.

Do not try to even make it a small one with only 3. You will lose all respect as a writer and a lot of people reading this besides the pervs.

Here we go! Why would you even ask that? The story is going great right now. With the harem aspect of it you will ruin it. I wish for once there authors would stop asking chat if the should make it a harem.

cant wait for more