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Respect for the dedication. I'm happy that there are authors on this website who truly care about their story. I have not read a lot so I don't know what happens after. The only advice I have is that it's sometimes better to have a periode/chapter that is slower paced (or something like fillers), so that the readers can 'have a rest' and so that you can make a bigger connection with characters and readers. [It's still your book, you decide what happens in it. This was just some advice from a Tree ;) ] Keep this up 📖

Yust know that you're doing great. Keep this up and this novel will definitely hit the charts 👍

**: No hate towards the author. Almost every story has flaws so it's normal that this one also has them. I just wanted to point one of them out. Good luck with writing 👍

I feel like something needs to be pointed out. The location/background. Don't get me wrong, its not a bad location in general. It's just one of the worst locations/backgrounds you could have chosen for your kind of story. And don't compare this with 'Among Us', because there is a key difference between this story and 'Among us': the level of importance. This is a ship that would potentially determine the fate of humanity. Would you let someone, without a degree, in such a ship? Do you believe even for a second that the 'officers' on the ship have a single bit of authority, not being commanded by the headquarters on earth? Do you think that Neil Armstrong needed to pay for his food while he was on a mission? Would you not do as much psychological tests as humanly possible to make sure that everyone is in perfect condition (/have good characteristics for the job)? Would you not check/scan every 'corner' of the ship so nothing is wrong (for example, putting camera's everywhere)? It would've probably been a good story, but because of the location, almost everything sounds unrealistic and dumb.