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MC liked to talk about people being unreasonable but it seems that he turned into a hypocrite just as fast. 😂 Would have killed him with that "FIsT of destruction creation water fire mom dad of the sixteen thousand universes and their gods" but curses the person for protecting themselves... 👌

What? O.o This quests have 2 requirements. First is to complete 4 routs in the first part of the grand line. I think there are 4 in total so that means he has to SAIL the paradise four times from start to finish. This is probably some kind of mistranslation. Author probably ment one out of four. We'll, I hope that is the case. What does it mean to complete one of those? It has to mean that you have to visit each island on that route. It would be stupid if he just had to visit one island on it and then get to the last island. What would be the point? And the second requirement for this quests works great with the first. He has to draw a map of that route. He has to visit an island to be able to do that. The quest isn't about coping a map, it's about drawing it. He already skipped Little Garden so he won't be able to complete any of the requirements this time. I guess he would be able to restart. Well, biggest chance is, that author will just forget all about it and give MC the competition.

Those are 55 wasted points... It's like he didn't read "future is not unique but is branching". Seeing so far is almost pointless in a fight scenario. Let's say you see 30 seconds into the future during a fight. Your opponent is supposed to attack with a kick and then a 30 seconds of trading blows follows. To avoid the kick you act differently. The whole 30 seconds you just saw doesn't happen at all because your first move was changed. You see another 30 seconds into the future and change it within first second again. And again... And again... What changes if you see 10 minutes into the future? Nothing. You still instantly act differently (or almost instantly) and the whole 10 minutes changes again. It could be useful outside of combat but still, that a lot of points... 5 points out of those 55 could let him read minds or influence opponents minds. Influencing minds would especially work great for him because he has a skill/title that let's him profit from opponents mental state.

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Didn't he have a quest to beat a guy like this? :/ Pirate job advancement quest?

Aaaaaand his navigator job upgrade quest is messed up already. GG

"Yeah, you are a useless pair of tits. You let Kurama escape because you got worried. I know, don't mention it. I'm sure the citizens of Konoha would understand. I knew this would happen and I did nothing to prevent it so I'm a moron too. We are a match made in heaven." 🥰

Maybe you forgot that he lost half of his body to the MCs thunder-fire attack? Where did he implement that sharingan?

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Doesn't make any sense. If it was about water chakra, it would be reborn somewhere in the middle of an ocean and good luck finding it on the whole planets biggest body of water. Shinobi doesn't hold elemental Chakra in themselves, they change the nature of their Chakra if needed.

Authors stupidity.

Sure. She got so worried that the seal holding Kurama broke. Make sense. Especially after the seal was stabilized... Btw: dude knew that Obito will attack on this day, why didn't he set up a trap? Or decoy? Or hide in a location known only to him? This could have been avoided in so many ways.

*gets shot on the spot* end of story

Genius. He decided to do Blackbeards work for him. He took away his own strength. That is some GALAXY BRAIN MOVE right there...!

Ah yes, an old man with lifetime of expirience and training, fighting an 11yo boy that lost his family in a horrifying sea catastrophe a month ago, and spent that month fighting for his life alone in a forest full of murderous monsters. Perfect way to inspect how hardworking this mentally scared orphan is. Let's hope he put all his focus on randomly training a pet bird because his lifetime wish doesn't seem to be being a trainer at all... Like.. yes, it would be much smarter to use that time on researching farming knowledge, so he could ACTUALLY PROVE to the farm owner that this isn't some childish whim but a thought out plan that he is prepared to turn into reality. Dude... Just don't.

Close, we are in a Chinese fanfic.

Dude just got an equivalent of apocalyptic beast as a pet. I don't think this dungeon could pose any danger...

"Fast Heavy Girl" is probably the worst title for a pirate I have ever seen in fanfiction. Whats next? Tall Metal Guy Franky. Strong Sword Male Roronoa Zoro. Smart Tall Lady Nico Robin. Stupid Bouncy Boy Monkey D Luffy. Weak Greedy Woman Nami. Those posters would be a hit.

There is so many mistakes here... Or lack of understanding on authors part. Cooling magma isn't obsidian. Parts of cooling magma could become obsidian but it depands on many factors. There are reasons why people don't use obsidian as knifes, swords or for cutting in general (people with access to better materials ofc). It doesn't really matter how sharp you can make one material or the other. Shard of glass could be super freaking sharp and is still useless. And obsidian is glass - volcanic glass but still glass with extra steps. And please don't even talk about adding haki so it doesn't chip or shatter. If that would be a sufficient, it would be useless to even grade swords in this world. People with haki would just stroll around with swords made or glass, paper or random scraps of metal, it's just needs to be sharp, right...? Let's just add that this is a fantasy setting, there is more to the sword in OP universe than our normal smithing. MC thinking that he can beat thousands of years of weapon crafting expirience by chipping off some glass shards is pure stupidity.

If that would be sufficient, there would be no point in grading swords in one piece. They would just grab a random piece of glass, sheet of paper or metal, add Haki and call it their sword.