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7 is better; each has her own day.
It is nothing major, nor am I asking for money, it is just a vote. It is about whether you want a single female lead or a harem.
Primordial Soul's Rebirth
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
Looked
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Primordial Soul's Rebirth
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
Platypus
Gu Xi was pleasantly surprised. The creature in front of him was white all over except for a red mark in the middle of its forehead, which looked like a blooming lotus. It had a fluffy tail, and he had the urge to squeeze it.
Extracting Billions Of Toxins And Tempering An Unsullied Body
Eastern · Superior Human
Thnn/than.
"Let's run." Karvon suddenly shot forwards followed by Juliet and Silas didn't even know what to do and just followed, putting all of his chi into his legs and body, he felt lighter thnn before and as they passed, giant flying bugs from the sides and above came through towards them and then they all chased after the people who were trespassing in their area.
Cosmic Cultivation
Games · Dexter_Sled_1111
Decapitated/ dismember.
Meanwhile, a shadow which was on the ground moved at the same speed towards the ape and then the ape's right arm was suddenly decapitated and then it roared out loud in pain and it spun it's second arm around.
Cosmic Cultivation
Games · Dexter_Sled_1111
Priorities ...
"I found some snacks!" Talon exclaimed excitedly as he pulled out bags of chips, candies, and other snacks that he found in the fridge. "These look really nice. Want some?"
Dimension Weaver: My Wife Is The Dragon Empress!
Fantasy · Frost_Bite8
her
4. Fasit - The leader of the grygans, representing his people and their interests in negotiations with other races.
Akashic Records of the Bastard Child Engaged to a Goddess
Fantasy · Pendulum_
Happy wife, happy life.
He could feel the skies darkening as Serena's power coursed through him. He lay on the ground, dazed, and muttered to himself, "Note to self: never piss off Serena."
Akashic Records of the Bastard Child Engaged to a Goddess
Fantasy · Pendulum_
Mentality is wrong. OG networking. "Through marriage is how the tribe is strengthened."(House, Clan, Tribe.)
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Legend of Dragon Son-in-law
Urban · Sky Luo
There/They, here/hear.
"There are many children who take this tournament seriously. They are a lot of scouts hear for professional teams who are looking for the next Gem, and you could have ruined that kid's chance."
Virtual Sword God!
Fantasy · JKSManga
Novis not Alex.
Alex was thinking if his comment really could affect the match that much, then he must be someone special. If they were to meet in the future Alex was sure to want the kid on his team.
Virtual Sword God!
Fantasy · JKSManga
Their instead of there(location).
"Yes, there are so many children here. I can see it in there eyes. These children have the same passion to improve their sword skills as I did. With this, it gives me hope to believe that swordsmanship will always exist in one way or another."
Virtual Sword God!
Fantasy · JKSManga
Higher word count vs. grammar flowing properly. "was".
"Oh teacher, I was meant to ask, have you ever heard of a swordsman named Arthur Pendragon?"
Virtual Sword God!
Fantasy · JKSManga
there instead of they.
Paul began to demonstrate the skills. The first time he displayed attacks using the system. Each time he went from one skill to the next they would be a slight pause. Then paul demonstrated the same skills without using the system.
Virtual Sword God!
Fantasy · JKSManga
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Primordial Soul's Rebirth
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser