Badges 6
Moments 12
Honestly, at this point in the story, these characters have only blushed at each other with little sign of a burgeoning relationship. This seems a little forced, but it may just be me
Reiner secretly spied on Diana and Karl having their meal on the opposite side of the pavilion. She couldn’t help but smile satisfied before giving a long sigh, how long would they pretend nothing was happening? They should just admit their feelings already.
AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
Fantasy · DreamWeaverWriting
It's terrible that he is willing to sacrifice the life of so many villagers' for his personal revenge. Even if they give it a year, I doubt they would be successful anyway if they follow the Chief's plan 😩
ch 36 Chapter 36 – Wind Castle
AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
Fantasy · DreamWeaverWriting
I'm liking this development, I'm glad I found this gem of a story
ch 35 Chapter 35 – Inspection
AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
Fantasy · DreamWeaverWriting
This is an important question. I'm disappointed that it was left out
For her, the most appropriate elemental would be fire. The fire crystal would improve the user’s overall energy making their attacks restless and fierce. While the elemental fire didn’t help in body constitution and speed, it didn’t make it worse. So, she would have to train just like anyone else.
AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
Fantasy · DreamWeaverWriting
I think that glossary might be a nice addition to the story once you are finished. One that lists all the abbreviations, as well as a list of all of the runes and arrays with their images and perhaps even a short summary of what they do.
ch 20 Chapter 20 – The Tribute
AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
Fantasy · DreamWeaverWriting
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Lith had considered things thoroughly before asking, so he had already a solution at hand. He picked the biggest tray they had and filled it with the ashes collected in a bucket beside the fireplace.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
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ch 39 Chapter 39 Leaving the City
The Dark Blood Age
Sci-fi · Tian Xia Piao Huo
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Birth of the Demonic Sword
Eastern · Eveofchaos