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Since it's Tang12 automatically 5 stars, the premise is good for chp 1 and 2, not much can be seen for where the story direction will be it remains to be seen, for world-building since it's parallel Earth similar to our Earth it's already very much built with some tweaks from the author in the future, and lastly the writing is more engaging (at least in my opinion) than the author ROTK and Fallout 4 novel which was a massive improvement In my eyes, maybe it's because the author tries to change how he hold the characters conversation. I hope the author continues this novel because it was very interesting and makes me want to read more, of course no pressure intended with him already making 2 novels at the same time.

Since it was Tang12 who made it, I believe it would be a great piece of work just like his other work! The world-building is definitely already perfect as it was based on Fallout 4, for other things I can't see but I believe it would be great! Keep up the spirit author!

You know it's better to show where it's wrong like in this chapter these words blah blah than just says these verbs are wrong, and the past and present verbs are in the wrong position, I don't even care about the past or present verb as long as it is readable, you also have to remember English is not the Author 2nd language Also when you say the narrative sucks and like giving a summary, from where it's like a summary( maybe I'm wrong as I don't feel that way) At the end of the day, this is not an objective review but a subjective one and I can see from the way you review and comments on the other novels with the language you use Thank you for reading my rant

The story is good so far and it's easy to read with no grammar mistakes from what I read (I can be wrong as English is my 2nd language) Characters are pretty good like their counterpart in the novel and game, OC characters have some development but are not too focused on them except for one who becomes RO and 5 stars in my book as I like to read the historical characters lol So far so good keep up the good work! I have a busy time in life and reading this become a part of my resting time, I even haven't searched for another book in Webnovel because of my busy time!