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Andylovescandy: Writing Quality: 2 star = The grammar is very messy, it feels like I am reading a novel from lmntl, but its more confusing. Its still understandable to say the least so 2 stars.
Stability of Updates: 5 star = Author keeps releasing a lot of chapters which is nice.
Story development: 1 star = I have read the author works before and I realized that he keeps wanting to push this novel in the same direction as Hitose note, which was way better than this.
The only difference is, some new anime like Detective conan is added and instead of taking Raku's place author went for his brother.
The relationships are awkward, I get that, its the type of novel were MC is great and every girls keeps falling for our MC but this is the same place where the author fails and makes this novel worse than Hitose note or any other novel he wrote before.
The girls keep falling for MC but Author keeps cock blocking himself, even though we all know that he will have s*x with the girl a chapter later on.
Character design: 1 star: Even though the characters are from other animes, author fails to maintain the character's behaviors even though he doesn't have to think about any of them. (I know its hard to write and bla bla bla... but these characters already exist in other works, so its just copying the character's characteristics but author still fails to do so.)
Let's leave the other character's for now, but the author can't decide even on the MC characteristics. Sometimes he is dense, sometimes he is way to clever and flirty, sometimes he is a gentleman but other time is a creepy pervert.
He keeps acting like every girl belongs to him even though sometimes he keeps stopping himself from getting them. Like make your mind, do you want them or not.
And the characters, Every chapter at least 5 new characters are introduced and every one of them sounds and acts like a harem candidate, By the count of it, MC is fu*king every women in his town. I am on chapter 58 right now and I lost count of how many girls there are by the 10th chapter.
World Background: 2 Star = The world is very confusing since a lot of different anime's are cramped into one place. But props to the author for trying but it could be done better.
Conclusion: I am not hating on author or his work like I said, I liked his previous novel before but I am quite disappointed since instead of improving he went downhill from what he created.
If you want to read this novel keep in mind that its not going to be sophisticated in the very least. Its like a very plain ****** novel written by a hyped up author, who wants to make his novel good but it turns out bad. It's not that bad like some novels in this site but its not good either.
If you want to binge read something due to you having a lot of free time, go ahead and read this novel.
I suggest author to focus on making a single chapter perfect than releasing 10 in a day. Quality over Quantity.Start by Becoming a Mangaka
Jin_Mori_1539: I'm curious, what did he say before he deleted it?The Strongest Omni Traveler
Skepparn: Slowly changing personality is the worst decision you could ever make if the start mc is retarded lmao
Nobody would want to read past the retarded part to get to the half assed part if they had anything else to do or anything else to read which I do
Dropped in less than 10chapters but I won’t leave a bad review like I was planning cause the story has potential if you get your head out of your ass and realize that a ****ty mc makes a ****ty story enough said...Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows
Immortal_Potato: The character is terribly disappointing and beyond pathetic. Better to rewrite the. Try to fix his inconsistent mess of a “personality”. Author keeps making excuses that he is a “child” and all children “innately need friends”. That’s a load of nonsense. Some level 4 bots trying to boost the ratings.Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows
The Strongest Saiyan God (An ATG Fanfic) · C80
Shahriar_Shubho: See you guys again in 14-15days later 😑😶😑😶😑😶😑😶😑😶😑😶😑The Strongest Saiyan God (An ATG Fanfic) · C80
DarkDaoist: at this point we don't even know what is going on in MC's brain, is he tsudere or cold hearted or simply apathetic. is there a reason for him to be strong fast that he can't even talk to people like normal human.
to me his socializing ability is similar to a mutant from fallout series who can only speak few words "strong will find human milk" "strong will become stronger".Dragon Ga Kill · C48
Teas: Even if ‘development’ happens 200 chapters down the line where he finally grabs the reins and gains control, I would still give this novel a terrible review.
It doesn’t matter if it only happens for half a chapter, five consecutive chapters, or the whole novel (like this one so far). Any novel with even a lick of NTR is trash, and I’m sure most of my fellow R-18 literature enthusiasts would agree.
I’m not sure why you’re getting angry at people submitting factual reviews that are complaining about something most people don’t like in a novel. Yet, the author continues to write it! It’s his own choice, and it’s the readers’ own choice to speak (and review) poorly.
I almost feel that maybe you’re the authors alternate account 🤔🤔
Agent_Xenon: I am overwhelmed because of the ratings of the book got lower because of your recent chapters, so heres an extra to fix it. Also, I have a message for these moron readers of yours.
Wait for some things to develop you facks. Seriously why are you guys so fu ckin whiny? Couldn't you wait for the development for thhe MC to be the dominant one or something? Are you all morons? Are you so fuc king used to those trashy novels who doesn't properly develop their MC's? Wait for the development you fu cks. This is why I'm always disappointed about the readers here at webnovel, cause their tastes are so fucking nonsense and stupid, and you morons are prone to whining if things aren't going on your way. Can't you idiots wait for the stuff to develop for the MC? Sure it may be going on a bad turn, but I'm pretty sure author is going to work his magic soon enough, so quit whining you stupid cunts.
How Much For Your Soul? · C35
The Strongest Saiyan God (An ATG Fanfic) · C77
goldzi: he can make her hot milf in second npThe Strongest Saiyan God (An ATG Fanfic) · C76
Profane Prince of Domination · C143
Chris_reading: Na I like evil protagonist. But yeah he's becoming a bit full of himself even though he still needs daddy to take on his tribulations for him.Profane Prince of Domination · C143
SixPath: Atlast author removed that redundant cheat from him. But MC is becoming narcissist, not that he was not one already, but it is bordering the disorder level mania. I would prefer a anti hero protagonist instead of a evil one.Profane Prince of Domination · C143
The_blacksmith: I feel like Konrads had too much success too quickly recently, he's starting to get really cocky. He's needs to face s major set up soon or he's going to become the next Olrich and really overestimate himself in the future.Profane Prince of Domination · C143
MJAgo: Ok i came here for lust story but then suddenly it changed to fight between system users on earth, so for now i lost my interest so that means:
STOCKPILING STARTUUUUUThe Lust System · C21
LordFi7th: 1- they don't know who he is, why risk his real identity
2- all the **** in his list are useless at the moment as he is weak as fk, he should ask for a dual cultivation technique, or just superhuman strength if author doesn't want to go the "cultivation" route.The Lust System · C21
DarkKnight32: Also lets not forget about how stupid it is too look for revenge when they will never cross paths if he just goes into another city and uses a different face and lets not forget goe he does not even need money anymore also if he is looking to get revenge eay the f would he not look for battle skills and not some status check or inventory mc iq is 10The Lust System · C21
MJAgo: He really need to buy iq potion...to get out of his stupid state of mind.The Lust System · C20
Henki: Forced plot.
If you wanted him to "meet" the bad guys so much, you should've just made them follow him the first time.
Why did he even came here for? Didn't he already have enough money? The system also warned him but he still went there, and with the same face? Come on, you can do better. It's way too forced like this.
Not to mention that when he went to the casino he said the gain were 1:8, so he should have 9k and then finally 81k if he played the same game, not 20M.
Right now I think everyone is reading your story just for the r18 chapters, not the story ones...The Lust System · C20
MJAgo: Sigh~ author you finally did this... i can't handle stupid mc. . . I will wait for next chapter then will decide to continue or start stockpiling chapters to read them in future.The Lust System · C20
ErozothDraeor: Dude, come on, what is this ****. You made him so stupid he used the same face mask? seriously, im really not feeling like reading further.
Forget that, you made him stupid enough to go back? We knew this would happen, when your plot is so obvious people can comment on it before it happens...its bad plot.The Lust System · C20
Zarok: Come on, Max, you need to work on Lydia, work that iron while it is still hot, if you wait too long, Dex might "reconquer" her...The Lust System · C19
ChikaYo: 1. He just won 1 time only.
2. You state that the casino doesn’t really care that much money that mc win.
3. And now the big boss is looking for him. *shock*
If mc is not stupid, he’ll change his look everytime he use face mask when entering casino. Well greed will always be the beginning of downfall~The Lust System · C19
ErozothDraeor: Just to clear things up, he used a face mask, I am assuming he used one to look older otherwise they wont let him in the casino, why does they call him a kid?
I'm really hoping you wont make this gang thing an issue considering he used a mask from the system, that would just make the items it gives as useless.The Lust System · C19
Cosmosis: 2 things:
1. He USED a mask.. don't you dare make a fuss about gangs, but make it so the gang got the wrong person who was standing right in front of Max.
2. Please get our little fairy friend to give Max a very precise blowjob, she is the right size for it...The Lust System · C19
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