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ch 156 Chapter XIX: Guests Invited And Uninvited

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

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limit the techniques for each class so a third class ninja can't use the full power or all the gates of the seven gayea or a third class nen user can only open a limited amount of power. or you can also make it two classes that are all compatible so that you have 25 combinations so people can also use two of the same class to completely focus on one path and make the third a downgraded perk like if someone chooses the perk of sharingans illusion immunity it can only make them immune to illusions of a certain level like if the rank of the illusion is equal to their level and even slightly higher makes it a resistance instead of immunity or if they choose a perk like an uzumakis energy regeneration they get a downgraded version. also remember that there are tons of powers in the mcu that give powers so either make it impossible for them to use those paths to give themselves power or make it that they need to give up all the power they gain from the system to gain a power that is from mcu and after that their only cheat is the shop that they can only buy limited items from for research and after they give up the power directly granted by the system they can only use the shop items as refrence except items like swords and such that don't directly give them power. which might make it more complicated but also more simple because it will be like having a second of certain villains and heroes with different goals. contact me if you need help bouncing ideas i have a lot of ideas i won't be using or ideas I'm ok with sharing i have a book in webnovel for other writers to contact me.

ch 99 Chapter 99 Cut off One Head, then Kill it with fire.

Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer

Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer

Book&Literature · GnomeBob

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instead of jumping to a different person in each chapter level them up until level five or their first evolution or level cap before changing the perspective it builds anticipation makes the story easier to follow and also makes you less likely to forget certain things ofcourse if that is difficult you can continue this because they will apparently eventually meet each other

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Four Entities

Four Entities

Fantasy · Kamrok

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instead using each chapter for one person level up one of them till like their first evolution or their first level cap or level 5 then go to the next so it won't be as confusing

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Four Entities

Four Entities

Fantasy · Kamrok

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the only other way to get accepted is to apply from another country

"Yes I am"Minerva smiled"your son Edwin has been accepted into Hogwarts school of wizardry and magic ....take your time"

Harry Potter (Fanfic)

Harry Potter (Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Nolifeking

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