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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 48 “VACCUS DISSOLVO IMPETUM”

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Fantasy · PeterPan

Zabne123

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Yes and no. The author does a good job of keeping it pretty balanced. I can go into more detail but I don't want to spoil it. If I had to say anything then I would say he is strong but literally because of it he has to face many challenges.

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Fantasy · Arlemit

Zabne123

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Replied to Mi_Mika

This is the second time this has happened.

[Stats: 12 Strength, 12 Dexterity, 19 Endurance, 19 Focus]

Global Awakening: I, The Skill-Maker, Am The Arcane Emperor!

Urban · Mel_Aniv

Zabne123

2mth

Replied to Favy_Otamere

hey

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Fantasy · Arlemit

Zabne123

2mth

Replied to TempestStrider

i seen 9 once. what was worse is that the person even pretty much copied another novel.

Global Expedition: Saving the World of Cultivation

Eastern · Lazy bird

Zabne123

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 19 Chapter19-Skeleton Guard

I, the All-Class Magus, All My Awakening Skills are LvMax

Fantasy · Cancer_Reo

Zabne123

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Thank you for the chapter. I will say tho that you need more emphasis on who is saying what. some of the conversations can be a bit confusing on who is saying what because what they are saying can be from either person.

ch 12 Becoming the Academy’s Onahole Man V

Ero Academy

Games · KLNovel

Zabne123

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I have to say this is a good read and worth it to spend on. The mc is hard working and willing to learn. The world background is very original. I love the power lvl system as well. Its very unique and there is so much to it but in a good way. One thing i like for the mc is the partner system. It is a good way to have someone look out for his weaknesses and always look for ways to improve. makes it so that the story is always progressing and the is a clear path for the novel as far as the general area of where it's headed

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Fantasy · Arlemit

Zabne123

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I'm sorry but this chapter was too much. I'm pretty sure the author has some issues for thinking of something like this

ch 31 Punishing a Voyeur

Villain: Girlfriend Thief

Fantasy · Ani_On_Fire

Zabne123

5mth

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Thanks for the chapter and the hard work you put into these characters

ch 32 Chapter 32: Commander Ayesha

Rise of the Eromancer

Urban · Romeru

Zabne123

6mth

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Now this is where the concept of curses and boons and the effect they can have is interesting. Karma is like a currency so the more you have the better. Poor people don't mess with the rich because of fear of retaliation. You will have some who don't care but most do. This is the same concept with people with high karma such as the queen.

ch 31 31. Monster

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

Fantasy · ForManaga

Zabne123

6mth

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I am enjoying the side story since it's basically answering my questions. Thanks for the chapter

ch 11 11. Chhaya's Oath and Emotions

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

Fantasy · ForManaga

Zabne123

6mth

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I am new to Indian culture stories but so far it has been very interesting. Thank you the extra info for names and history it has been very helpful. This was a good chapter

ch 0 6 6. Paranoid King Of God's

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

Fantasy · ForManaga

Zabne123

6mth

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Hopefully with the upgraded difficulty that means a faster pace. Thanks for the chapter

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Zabne123

6mth

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Oh this barrier concept is quite interesting. I've never seen something like this done before. Thanks for the chapter I look forward to more

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I appreciate the quick reply. Honestly it's too much. There are times when you have over 5 extra chapters. It's different if this is a TV show but it's not so it's not needed. I can maybe understand if you were to do it with chapters where there is vital info that spans more than one chapter. If so then keep it to 3 paragraphs max. Especially with paid chapters. You have a good book and I am enjoying it very much. I hope you take what I said into consideration.

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Overall a very good read. I enjoy the witty banter between the mc and his sister. I like how they work together and they have different ways of looking at something so they help cover each other's weakness. I will say tho that addition of 2-5 paragraphs of the last chapter at the beginning of each chapter is annoying. It's completely not needed and utterly useless. Just wasted the readers time. Unless your plan is to post a new chapter once a month then maybe I can understand but if that's not the case then get rid of it. Don't we pay for the size of the chapter? So basically I'm double paying for part of each chapter and that is wrong.

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Replied to Wang_Tang

Was just going to reply this lol. It really is basically the same thing. They just changed some names and few things they same but everything else is the same. Kind of sad really

I Treat You as My Sister, But You Want to be My Wife?!

Urban · Not Tasty

Zabne123

6mth

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This is basically the same first chapter as last week's trial read "Mistaking My Sister-n-Law For My Wife After Getting Drunk". There are a few words that are different.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1 Just Broke Up, And Now Getting A Marriage Certificate With The Ex-Girlfriend's Sister?_1

I Treat You as My Sister, But You Want to be My Wife?!

Urban · Not Tasty

Zabne123

6mth

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Thanks for the chapter

ch 68 Chapter 68 - Ozryn Academy Secret Realm

Crystal Evolution

Fantasy · Sleds_Writer

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