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it started out good but around chapter 60 it getting stupid. The author wanted to make it harder for the mc and and comedy so the system become an a-hole, then have you never heard of saving half of your points. He talk about having a survival instinct.... isn't wise to boost your strength with points. If not convert some point in to cash .... what is that too easy for the mc? it not cost effective but better that making $200,000 a night and not will to take 1-10k to spend but to ask for a loan from a friend ..... stupid. The aunt that in a coma isn't in any danger as of now and it will take weeks anyway to get what you need... why make it harder on the mc for really no reason. how stable is it flipping houses it the slums of new york compared to converting point. dropping as of now.

when you make a renicantion LN I get it in the beginning that the mc has to hide but what the point it you hide with no power? you have an op system but refuse to take advantage of it to the sake of what I guess is there more chapter and not story or character development. For year not putting anything stats in magic even though it the bread and butter to geting strong stability. I'm well aware of explosive strength gain in moments of need with withholding stats but .... really. Not even 1 stat to magic a year? You can have strength and hide it but to put a stop to lasting growth to just sell more chapter ... just plain sad. You want him to less reliant on the system great, a lot of mc do this too. To out right not take advantage of it then for no real reason next that system ? It might just be better for you to re write the story and take out the train system the reason most of the people picked up these lousy LN. To write the typical Ln and have less complain about your creativity 😉.

To be honest I liked the first few chapters of this novel, well maybe the first 10ish chapters 🤔. The novel change for a good prospect to something to read a palette cleanser, everything pretty good after reading a few chapters of this novel. The turning point for me at least was the mini arc where he saves his kidnapped siblings. In a normal system novel you hide the system no matter what..... kill all to silence the secret. Fine you dont kill your brother....ok. But some random dude? that was an enemy, that was actively trying to kill you? What? I was hoping for a learning curve after he spared the first people how tried to kill your chicken, your new to the world it's not in you..... st first fine. The problem is the naiveté of letting it happen again .... and again. Sorry if you've come this far had to vent. This had so much potential to be good. Then you shoot your left foot, then right foot, then ........ head shot. Eat to fill your stomach not to savor each bit. Well the reading equivalent of that.

I enjoyed this novel since the beginning but as the story progress is get more convoluted. This is something I can put up with but the racism 😒 is a bummer. A little here and the is fine to ignore cause.... well there is misunderstandings on both sides or all sides, fine understood on to the next chapter. But the thing is when the Mc kill daemon, selfish and arrogant sect members, and other hostile race the Author didn't degrade them as much as westerners. If you're going to kill just kill why make it a race thing? Sigh when the mc leaves Earth hopefully it diverge from this kind of writing. Just wanted to rant sorry if you read to the end