Using their power against them. Nice.
ch 115 Black Wedding. (1)
Fantasy · TheOnlyOneGodGrid
I love this story. I cannot love it enough.
ch 114 Holy War. (3)
Fantasy · TheOnlyOneGodGrid
This is the best romance story. I just can't thank you enough, author, for writing this and sharing it with the world.
ch 105 The Way He Loves. (3)
Fantasy · TheOnlyOneGodGrid
He did in the letters he wrote. In person I don't fully remember, but I don't think he used the title then. He died in 2008. "Young master" together I don't know about. It doesn't seem too far fetched for me from master (like when a servant informs a visitor that "The young master isn't home right now, but I can leave a message for you if you like."), but I don't know for sure.
"Young master."
Fantasy · Avan
At last a good analogy I can read without cringing. So many times these stories seem to love using analogies based on different scenarios of cuckoldry, it's disgusting and perverted. I forget if Super Gene does that as well, but the Legendary Mechanic did it almost exclusively.
Han Sen didn't know if all the men who had fallen under a god's thumb were this dumb, but it was clear that Violet was completely convinced. It was like Violet was being sold as a slave, yet he was taking pride in calculating how much he was worth.
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
Ye Xiu?
Han Sen also clad himself in his Peacock King's soul robe. The two beast souls appeared on Han Sen at the same time, making Han Sen considerably stronger. He summoned power through Jadeskin again and threw a punch to meet the incoming storm of electricity.
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
The third-largest river in the world, located entirely within China.
The sadness was as broad and powerful as the Yangtze, rolling forward with the steadiness and implacability of a river. The sensation rocked Han Sen. The sadness was clear, yet it wasn't a raw or passionate emotion. It wasn't painful like losing your family, and it wasn't the heartache of being betrayed by a loved one. It wasn't the soul-rending anguish of losing everything that you cherished. It just resided in Han Sen's chest, softly. The ache was so gentle that sometimes, Han Sen could barely even sense it. It floated like a mountain stream, but there wasn't a single ripple to be seen.
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
says the guy.
Even though Han Sen had a voracious intellect and an impressive ability to learn, he could only walk one path. He couldn't learn everything there was to be learned in the universe.
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
Actually the half-deified refers to the upgrade of the blood pulse Sutra, not the downgrade of the demon.
ch 2696 Reversing Bloodline
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
They are among the Very High who do not practice the Very High Sense, if I remember correctly.
"Not if Han Sen activated the glitch himself. If that happened, it would have nothing to do with us," Li Xue Cheng grinned darkly. He then went on to say, "He was the reason that we lost everything. Are you really going to sit back and accept that?"
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
Although they hadn't yet figured out where Han Sen's coincidence came from, they knew Han Sen's situation wasn't as dire as it seemed.
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
Coincidence? I think not!
Although they hadn't yet figured out where Han Sen's coincidence came from, they knew Han Sen's situation wasn't as dire as it seemed.
Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
Excellent! One grammar edit: before Eldrian and remembering his visit -> before Eldrian and him remembering his visit
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Games · Breuno
Nice.
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Games · Breuno
Very confusing to read, and very wordy. It took me a minute to figure out what you were saying. As a suggestion for how to make it a bit more brief and hopefully clear: Death in such a large battle is ["common", "likely", or "almost certain" depending on the gravity you want to give it], and resurrection in such chaos rare if not impossible. This is made all the more frightening by the fact that each person's death might only add to the undead's numbers. I think I still prefer my first edit, maybe. But this is my new suggestion while trying to cover all the bases and emotions that you hit with your current draft.
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Games · Breuno
Actually it is something I say rather generously to friends when they say something like "Do you want pancakes?" It is not something I say begrudgingly but willingly. (:
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Games · Breuno
I cannot stop expressing how much I love this story. Thank you for the chapter.
ch 118 Black Wedding. (4)
SSS Class Suicide Hunter
Fantasy · TheOnlyOneGodGrid