the scene eith the kid is so annoyingly not needed. this is just prolonging a convo that should have happrned at the beginning of the chapter. the extra charactee is not needed in the plot at all. waste of words
ch 30 Second Master of Mu Pushed the Blame
Urban · Mo Qianyi
i like this part. the author did a good job in this chapter
ch 93 Chapter 93 Back to Work
Urban · GoddessKM
this is sooo stupid... the hech too wordy too long in one frame. what th he h
ch 53 Chapter 53 Alexi going Berserk
Urban · GoddessKM
author, if u want the character to be consisten stop mame dropping brands that are so conspicuous its so ridiculous
ch 48 Chapter 48 Contract Signing
Urban · GoddessKM
chloe was bult overall poorly as a character. one of the greatest assets of great storytelling is to make a strong villain who is up to par with the lead, only with opposing stances or views. these types of women are a dime a dozen and the way she acts doesnt match the level of sophistication in her supposed world. she could have been built as deviously manipulative with an angelic facade, it will be cliche but at least more acceptable.
ch 21 The Contract
Urban · Tres_Aguila
who talks like this these days? i like how the cliche plot is used though. but they have such a power disadvantage. the way Leo is setting her up for failure. if it was a business eeal, she needs to know all the premisw. deception because he did not disclose the motive of the marriage request and chloe's involvement. granted, he was attracted to her even prior to all of that, he should have been honest. and that includes being honest with his mother why he hated chloe
ch 20 A Night To Remember
Urban · Tres_Aguila
why do u always make ur fl very unmindful and cannot survive without the male lead? i noticed your main leads are too good to be true... also i am hoping on your other works to make your women more intelligent
ch 133 Facing the Consequences
Urban · Realfantasies
alright i like the character but what is it with writers writing their gls are stupid f*ckheads???? innicent or pure she is just stuuùpid. how can she even a mafia boss' daughter without a hunt of self preservation. and mind u, the author was trying to let us think she is intelligent. being too naive and being innocent are two different things. gosh!
ch 80 Wet
Urban · Chichii
fropping this. fl is sooo stuupid and lace is too slow with unnecessary plot.
ch 31 Chapter 31 – The surprise design
Urban · Glorious_Eagle
its been so long. the ml is always absent during her emotional abuse. while he and the fl are not in love she is alaays rigud and stupid character disguised as intelligent and harworking but no backbone. gosh! she really shouod just die. or the author can prolly oay us back the coins spent
ch 179 Regret and Hate
Urban · Mr. Yan
do in this universe, a brilliant doctor like the fl us so stuoid not to even check her an estry e en with the imrpobability. for someone so good in science, and should hsve been empirical in her views, she is always emotional and shuts her mouth in crucial convos, the author is allowing more airtimr to stupid worthless side characters to buold up a draggged storyline just to agitate the readers. sure. my blood prsssure is high because the fl is soo stupid and the ml is a decorative piece of meat. do better!
ch 117 Reality
Urban · Mr. Yan
abd once again here we ladies and gentlemen and woman who allows men in her life to manipuoate her...
ch 122 Make A Deal With Jack
Urban · PurpleLight
this is dragging this too much
ch 120 Mission Fail!
Urban · PurpleLight
bella is killing others by being herself... being too kind is srupid
ch 114 Finally, Sean Called
Urban · PurpleLight
too much info on side characters. its annoying
ch 111 How Old Are You?
Rebirth from the Ashes
Urban · Sweet Seven