raech - Profile

Homophobic author… creates a lgbt city just to have the protagonist destroy it because it’s “heretic”. Bad flow for the story, it’s quite hard to read as every sentence feels disconnected with everything else…

This contains spoilers, read at your own risk. I'm biased against harems (if its a small one and a WELL made one, then sure i can digest that shit.), so don't even bother with this score if you're one of those that like to play throw a pokeball at all women in existence. His mindset was of our "world" so i don't understand what made him think of a harem in the first place, specially after they went through soul fusion, that should literally have made them perfect as they are one... I was going to rate this 5star when i started to binge read this, but after a certain shit-show happened for 0 reason i gave this 1.0 as it flew far away from the original idea of the story and now its like pokemon, but capturing slave wives instead, they downgrade to 0 personality after they interact with him for a bit, except for Konan, she's basically the only one that actually has a reason to act the way she does around him.. and him to her. The soul fusion was an awesome idea, specially because it was "believable", their connection made this story really awesome for me, even the tiny bit of Tsunade's soul there... but it went downhill when he decided to "save" her instead of letting her die due his unexperience over soul matters, if she died there they'd have had so much more development and could've been a huge plot to make him learn more about their fusion, as to correct it and make it perfect. But saving her and the start of a harem makes 0 sense, she has nothing to offer to them and her personality just went a complete 180... And then he started to embrace a "harem" that is basically consists of the all women he interacted so far, it was too much. Ringo's case should be just a infatuation, idk why make her part of that, he started "liking" her out nowhere, then she becomes just a plaything... Mei's case is even worse, she was akin to their daughter and disciple... their bond would be so nice if it kept that way, now she's just a piece of meat to his needs. well whatever, i poof, if you ever decide to rewrite this thing without a harem and without making them lose all personality after interacting with MC then I'd gladly read your future stories, grammar is readable compared to most fan-fictions and the plot was actually towards my liking, you were exploring the world and not just blindly following cannon with 1% different things, but with easier fights/higher power level(99.9999% fanfictions here.)