Schizophrenia going rampant unnoticed thanks to technology 馃槀
The new mind-phones no longer came with screens, and were silent to everyone around, making having private conversations easier, even in crowded places.
Games 路 Galanar
ch 484 A seduction attempt ... twice!
Games 路 Raj_Shah_7152
not a fatal disease, but still ended up dying. .. isn't it the definition of fatal? 馃槀
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Games 路 Raj_Shah_7152
didn't expect it to end there, so abruptly.. .
ch 800 The Grand Finale
Games 路 Soaring Flames
I feel ya. .
What if this one was an exception?
Games 路 Soaring Flames
be my guest
Come Spring..... we'll show them who's boss!!"
Fantasy 路 lumydee
your ancesters were sick of seeing you jerk off, they send you away in another world 馃ぃ
"Was it because I used my hand for some pre-sleep exercise?"
Eastern 路 Ancient Xi
i like such banter ^^
"Good things naturally happen to good people," Arran replied. "So I expect your luck will remain miserable. Now come, let me show you what I've gained."
Fantasy 路 TomVanDyke
*now
But bow that he heard Lucius, he couldn't help but shiver a bit from regret.
Fantasy 路 lumydee
You have a good grasp of pacing. So nothing major to complain about 馃槣But now that things have settled, I think I would like to see him struggle a little. I'm not saying things have been smooth sailing until now for him.. But in terms of reading experience, I didn't feel any real danger for him lately... The kidnapping attempt, everybody knew it would fail, obviously, and even before against the Tekur, since he grew stronger and stronger by extracting them, as a reader you could tell he was going to be OK in the end, even if you expected some treatorous plot by hyumans..So something like a dilemma, or a threat where he will/might lose something/someone important to him would be good. But that's just my opinion
ch 536 Your Choice
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy 路 HideousGrain