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chilkaa: Amazing ending to part one. I am a sometime commenter and an often silent lurker but always know silence doesn’t mean I don’t love what you have done, just that I can’t think of a comment that hasn’t already been said. Will be here when you return to continue reading anything you will give us, whether it comes regularly or not.The Hitting Zone · C528
disbox: I said it before and I'll say it again, this is one of the best, if not the best sport Webnovel i ever read. It was a blast to read and i found myself waiting for it every single day, thank you so much!The Hitting Zone · C528
The Hitting Zone · C465
Qrow: Let me get this straight:
1. Everyone has 360 colums.
2. Normal people has 200 grey colums at birth, leaving 164 white ones.
3. Every year one of the colums drains and becomes a grey one.
4. To unlock a grey one you need to put in 10 life crystals which apperantly is a rare drop and very expensive.
5. To get more power you need to unlock all your grey colums.
6. You call only unlock a grey colum ONCE so if you dont fill all of your grey within a year you can never reach the next rank.
This is the stupidest power system I've ever read. First of all if its THAT hard to rank up goverments would restrict it to their top agents. Even if they didnt it would be impossible for a normal person to do so since they need to fill their wheel all in one go which would mean that our MC would NEVER. EVER! have chosen this as a proffession since in this line of work, to get money (so he can take care of his sister) he needs to be strong first. To become strong he needs money to buy life crystals to power up, ****** this a catch 22.
Lets do some quick math. Our MC had 152 non grey colums at birth. After 15 years this becomes 152-15=137. 364-137=227 grey colums to fill. Each grey one requires 10 life crystals (rare drop remember) causing him having to gather 2270 life crystals to break through to the next rank with 10 more for each year it takes. Now since this apperantly is a rare drop, costing the same ammount as a good weapon, lets say 10% of the monsters drop this. That means our mc needs to kill 22 700 monsters to rank up. And this is from the LOWEST RANK to the next one. That means that for hunanity to get an iron rank they need to kill on a average 25 000 monsters for Each. Damn. One. They would be national treasures, not something whos life you would risk for a damn assessment!
Not only that, our MCs ONLY weakness was that his life force drained at an insane rate. We just gave him the ability to fill colums faster then anyone else in existance without any real explination of how or why. If "Goldfinger" was truly so powerful why doesnt EVERYONE and their grandmother have it? No we give the most powerful tool at our disposal to a random poor guy... seems about right? Now our MC has zero weaknesses, is a genius who can learn things other poeple does in 103 days working 18 hours a day by half-assing it in 3 days. Sounds fair no? This will become yet another Gary Stue running around screaming "look at my amazing system" story... I'm litterally expecting a harem member to show up in 5 chapters and his little sister getting the hots for him which somehow is acceptable in this new world.Monster Paradise · C17
Kin: Would it help your income to sell audiobooks? I'm a narrator/producer on Audible and I'm willing to work with you if you want.Data Dragon Danika · C370
The Hitting Zone · C453
XArezzX: It's a Novel by Einsilon-Sensei so it's 100% guaranteed
You are not gonna regret reading it
Can be addictiveBabel
chilkaa: Agree. If jake keeps doing those abb exercise to strengthen his core and keeps getting stronger it will come wooden bat or no.The Hitting Zone · C434
half_empty: I thought I had left a comment on the last chapter that I was busy but now I can’t seem to find it. Sorry for making you guys worry! Also, I had some drama with another writer because I left them a review. It was my honest thoughts and then that writer used her old account to give me a similar review. I called her out on discord and she had the lamest excuse: my friend did it. Lol okay. So childish. Especially because she could have just deleted my review if she didn’t like it. Of course, I won’t be deleting her review, cuz 1) you can only delete when you use a pc. 2) I have plenty of readers that review my story for five stars for exp so it balances out.
Lol I’ve gotten very far off track, but yea, just so much has happened this weekend. Also, my bowling team is in second and there’s one more week left so we still have a chance for first. I’m a dork. No shame 😂The Hitting Zone · C434
Alkiran: Supposedly the writing quality picks up after 50+ chapters... unfortunately I couldn’t get that far.
@Author, you should take some time review and rewrite your beginning. The story is moderately interesting, but is riddled with mistakes. Minor grammar issues aside (comma usage in particular), the inconsistent mechanics/plot holes and the improper tense usage might seem like niggling things, but they end up completely detracting from the overall quality and experience.
If I’m honest, the tense usage in the first chapter was bad enough I almost completely dropped the story then and there for fear of MTL. That definitely needs to be fixed as first impressions matter. Keep it simple, stick to one narrative tense; past or present. In the end though, it was that third or fourth time I noticed that you completely forgot/messed up details of your own story, that made me kind of not really want to continue reading it the next day. If I, the reader, feel like you, the creator, didn’t really care enough to keep your story straight, it ends up pretty damn discouraging.Rise of The Undead Legion
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I Was Reincarnated Into A Harem Game As A Villain, Please Stay Away I'm Gay! · C143
WindyLion_Mark_3: My brother’s former best friend drives a Ferrari, but his family is in debt on the verge of bankruptcy
In addition, here in America, you can get tax cuts greater than your debt’s interest depending on what kind of debt you have and how much it’s worth. (Specifically housing loans)
Therefore, I do not believe that the generalization is racist. I do know people who refuse to go into debt, but they are in the vast minority.Treasure Hunt Tycoon · C13
Mannymangos: Clearly the superior title for this chapter would be: April Showers.The Hitting Zone · C420
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SaintChops: Shouldn't post these things that's why websites get taken down 😔😔The City of Terror · C115
Dank_god: boxnovel is the go to for premium novels endorsed by meThe City of Terror · C115
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1410: The mc's an idiot
I intend to repeat this until i notice a change in int.😅😅😅The City of Terror · C35
The City of Terror · C32
1410: The mc's an idiot
I intend to repeat this until i notice a change in int.The City of Terror · C25
ThrustThunder: If you'd like some suggestions of my favorite Novels:
~The New World by Monsoon117 (Teen's World is engulfed by a System. Alone and trapped, he must suffer and endure to survive. VERY WELL WRITTEN!) 5/17/2017
~The Legend of Randidly Ghosthound by puddles4263 (Spiritual inspiration to New World. Guy defends Neewbie Village against Monster waves to survive System World) 3/31/2017
~The Games We Play by Ryuugi (Kid gains power of Videogame Protagonist, Min/max's his skills. Must pretend to be Badass Mafia Boss to outsmart Godly enemies. The most Cunning/Crafty MC I've read in a long time.) 2015
~A Monster Who Levels Up (Guy transforms into Monsters as his trait, Uses their unique skills to become Op/Rich) 2017
~The Novel's Extra (Same Author as MWLU about Author who is trapped in his own Novel by a Ghost Writer, must make himself Plot Relevant to gain Exp) 2018
~The World Turned into a Game After I Woke up (Guy's World gains Gaming System, Gets killed so much he returns to the past, Shameless looting ensues! Fast food) 2017
~Worth the Candle by Cthulhuraejepsen (Kid appears in a Battle Royal based of the D&D World he created, gets skillsheet, ruminates on tropes) 2017
~Dragonborn Saga by Don_Dokhmesy (Guy reborn into a overly Modded VR Skyrim World, Becomes Lord of Immersion!) 2018
~The Tutorial is Too Hard (Guy mistakenly chooses Hell mode Yutorial when World gains system, must become OP to survive) 2015
~Seoul Station’s Necromancer (Guy returns from conquering a System World to find it has bleed into his own World, becomes OP) 2016
~The Arcane Emperor (Guy accidently transports himself to Game System World, Gets OP Learning class) 2013
~Shadow Hack (Guy gets Shadow Clones to XP grind for him, becomes more OP every chapter) 2017
~Leveling Up And Becoming Undefeatable (NEET Reincarnated with a System that gives the Skills of Other Wuxia Protagonists, junk food writing at it's most shameless) 2013
~Invincible Level Up (Begins exactly as LUaBU, but takes a more serious World building approach) 2012
~Godly Model Creator (Kid in Superpower World uses ability to copy others skills to become OP, Kills his enemies!) 2013
~The Strongest Gene (Guy reincarnates to World of genetic modification with cheat skill of Luck. Creative face slapping abounds) 2017
~Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World (Guy regresses and uses VRMMO to get revenge on enemies by creating an Empire of Brothers-in-Arms funded by Shameless looting. OG of it's Genre) 2010
~Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God (Rips off Rebirth heavily, but the release rate is exemplary and I've commented on almost every chapter) 2015
~Night Ranger (Transferred into a D&D VRMMORPG, Guy must gain Power before the Apocalypse happens) 2015
~Advent of the Archmage (Same as Night Ranger but more Magic Driven) 2016
~Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read) 2015
~The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream) 2012
~Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC) 2016
~When A Mage Revolts (Guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages) 2016
~The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic) 2017
~Tales of Demons and Gods (Mad Snail's Novel, turned Manga, turned Anime about a regressor who uses his Advanced knowledge to become rich and slap faces) 2015
~Upgrade Specialist in Another World (Increase your cultivation by making your accessories OP? Yes please!) 2011
~Strongest Abandoned Son (A Cultivator reincarnates into our World, uses powers to slap faces and get rich) 2012
~The Desolate Era (Kid reincarnates into Wuxia World with OP cultivation technique, eventually kills Gods with his sword. First Novel I read here.) 2014The City of Terror · C1
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