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chilkaa: Agree. If jake keeps doing those abb exercise to strengthen his core and keeps getting stronger it will come wooden bat or no.The Hitting Zone · C434
half_empty: I thought I had left a comment on the last chapter that I was busy but now I can’t seem to find it. Sorry for making you guys worry! Also, I had some drama with another writer because I left them a review. It was my honest thoughts and then that writer used her old account to give me a similar review. I called her out on discord and she had the lamest excuse: my friend did it. Lol okay. So childish. Especially because she could have just deleted my review if she didn’t like it. Of course, I won’t be deleting her review, cuz 1) you can only delete when you use a pc. 2) I have plenty of readers that review my story for five stars for exp so it balances out.
Lol I’ve gotten very far off track, but yea, just so much has happened this weekend. Also, my bowling team is in second and there’s one more week left so we still have a chance for first. I’m a dork. No shame 😂The Hitting Zone · C434
Alkiran: Supposedly the writing quality picks up after 50+ chapters... unfortunately I couldn’t get that far.
@Author, you should take some time review and rewrite your beginning. The story is moderately interesting, but is riddled with mistakes. Minor grammar issues aside (comma usage in particular), the inconsistent mechanics/plot holes and the improper tense usage might seem like niggling things, but they end up completely detracting from the overall quality and experience.
If I’m honest, the tense usage in the first chapter was bad enough I almost completely dropped the story then and there for fear of MTL. That definitely needs to be fixed as first impressions matter. Keep it simple, stick to one narrative tense; past or present. In the end though, it was that third or fourth time I noticed that you completely forgot/messed up details of your own story, that made me kind of not really want to continue reading it the next day. If I, the reader, feel like you, the creator, didn’t really care enough to keep your story straight, it ends up pretty damn discouraging.Rise of The Undead Legion
The Hitting Zone · C425
I Was Reincarnated Into A Harem Game As A Villain, Please Stay Away I'm Gay! · C143
WindyLion_Mark_3: My brother’s former best friend drives a Ferrari, but his family is in debt on the verge of bankruptcy
In addition, here in America, you can get tax cuts greater than your debt’s interest depending on what kind of debt you have and how much it’s worth. (Specifically housing loans)
Therefore, I do not believe that the generalization is racist. I do know people who refuse to go into debt, but they are in the vast minority.Treasure Hunt Tycoon · C13
Mannymangos: Clearly the superior title for this chapter would be: April Showers.The Hitting Zone · C420
The Return of the God Level Assassin [BL] · C12
SaintChops: Shouldn't post these things that's why websites get taken down 😔😔The City of Terror · C115
Dank_god: boxnovel is the go to for premium novels endorsed by meThe City of Terror · C115
You Plus Me Equals · C31
1410: The mc's an idiot
I intend to repeat this until i notice a change in int.😅😅😅The City of Terror · C35
The City of Terror · C32
1410: The mc's an idiot
I intend to repeat this until i notice a change in int.The City of Terror · C25
ThrustThunder: If you'd like some suggestions of my favorite Novels:
~The New World by Monsoon117 (Teen's World is engulfed by a System. Alone and trapped, he must suffer and endure to survive. VERY WELL WRITTEN!) 5/17/2017
~The Legend of Randidly Ghosthound by puddles4263 (Spiritual inspiration to New World. Guy defends Neewbie Village against Monster waves to survive System World) 3/31/2017
~The Games We Play by Ryuugi (Kid gains power of Videogame Protagonist, Min/max's his skills. Must pretend to be Badass Mafia Boss to outsmart Godly enemies. The most Cunning/Crafty MC I've read in a long time.) 2015
~A Monster Who Levels Up (Guy transforms into Monsters as his trait, Uses their unique skills to become Op/Rich) 2017
~The Novel's Extra (Same Author as MWLU about Author who is trapped in his own Novel by a Ghost Writer, must make himself Plot Relevant to gain Exp) 2018
~The World Turned into a Game After I Woke up (Guy's World gains Gaming System, Gets killed so much he returns to the past, Shameless looting ensues! Fast food) 2017
~Worth the Candle by Cthulhuraejepsen (Kid appears in a Battle Royal based of the D&D World he created, gets skillsheet, ruminates on tropes) 2017
~Dragonborn Saga by Don_Dokhmesy (Guy reborn into a overly Modded VR Skyrim World, Becomes Lord of Immersion!) 2018
~The Tutorial is Too Hard (Guy mistakenly chooses Hell mode Yutorial when World gains system, must become OP to survive) 2015
~Seoul Station’s Necromancer (Guy returns from conquering a System World to find it has bleed into his own World, becomes OP) 2016
~The Arcane Emperor (Guy accidently transports himself to Game System World, Gets OP Learning class) 2013
~Shadow Hack (Guy gets Shadow Clones to XP grind for him, becomes more OP every chapter) 2017
~Leveling Up And Becoming Undefeatable (NEET Reincarnated with a System that gives the Skills of Other Wuxia Protagonists, junk food writing at it's most shameless) 2013
~Invincible Level Up (Begins exactly as LUaBU, but takes a more serious World building approach) 2012
~Godly Model Creator (Kid in Superpower World uses ability to copy others skills to become OP, Kills his enemies!) 2013
~The Strongest Gene (Guy reincarnates to World of genetic modification with cheat skill of Luck. Creative face slapping abounds) 2017
~Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World (Guy regresses and uses VRMMO to get revenge on enemies by creating an Empire of Brothers-in-Arms funded by Shameless looting. OG of it's Genre) 2010
~Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God (Rips off Rebirth heavily, but the release rate is exemplary and I've commented on almost every chapter) 2015
~Night Ranger (Transferred into a D&D VRMMORPG, Guy must gain Power before the Apocalypse happens) 2015
~Advent of the Archmage (Same as Night Ranger but more Magic Driven) 2016
~Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read) 2015
~The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream) 2012
~Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC) 2016
~When A Mage Revolts (Guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages) 2016
~The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic) 2017
~Tales of Demons and Gods (Mad Snail's Novel, turned Manga, turned Anime about a regressor who uses his Advanced knowledge to become rich and slap faces) 2015
~Upgrade Specialist in Another World (Increase your cultivation by making your accessories OP? Yes please!) 2011
~Strongest Abandoned Son (A Cultivator reincarnates into our World, uses powers to slap faces and get rich) 2012
~The Desolate Era (Kid reincarnates into Wuxia World with OP cultivation technique, eventually kills Gods with his sword. First Novel I read here.) 2014The City of Terror · C1
Dungeon Core Online · C36
KitKatxKK: No it is still ongoing. I have the entire thing written up but it needs major editing and I don't have time to do it right now due to two ongoing book launches. So it has to wait till the new year. As I can't do a Thailand, US Canadain release of one book and korea wide launch of another. And still work on the other two novels I was doing before. Lol. XDYou Plus Me Equals · C28
You Plus Me Equals · C30
TalenX: A good but unfortunately immature story. I don't mean that in that the themes are childish and there are problems with the world, what I mean is that it is literally undeveloped as a concept. Perhaps if I used to author's power level convention it would be better to describe it as 'adolescent'.
The start of the story is honestly relatively good, starting with a prologue which starts out in a fairly unique direction, a system that fails to install. It shows up in the story proper but I found the choice to start the story that way was honestly refreshing.
The first two volumes are fairly good, though they still show the problems that the story has with it pacing through out. It's both painfully slow and ridiculously fast. The story is trapped in a span of several days where very little happens and the world function ok, and then globally everything goes to hell. There is no ramp up or foreshadowing so it's pretty jarring.
Unfortunately after volume 2 the MC becomes a 10 year old edge lord who solves everything with violence and people let him get away with it. Honestly even if you're the strongest person on the scene when you start running rampant on military bases and smacking soldiers around, they're going to find a way to sort you out.
That said I think the writer should keep writing, I think they have some talent that if they work on developing would enable them to express a much more impressive story, there are already shadows of it showing up in this story.
The advice I would recommend is counter to what I tell most authors: you need to go back and rewrite your story. This story begins with a solid and interesting concept, but a concept isn't a story. Your concept is 'what happens to make the story'. You refine that into a story premise, 'this is what happens in the story I want to share'. A clearer expression may be that your story concept is a single sentence, your premise includes that concept but expands it to a paragraph.
After that work on pacing and world development, try to come up with a power scale that ramps up slowly. From the get go everyone the MC encounters are either high or perfect compatibility unless they have two different compatibles. And the main character is always presented as the strongest by a ridiculous margin.
There are lots of things I think could be done better but I don't want to tell the author how to make his story so I'll end with this: The concept you created can become a better story than this, and I honestly believe you can write a better story then this at this point.The Strongest Beast Tamer
The nuclear test (Rough draft) · C92
ikka: What i meant was that i had been crying for 2 chapters.. but insted of saying that, i have kind of gotten used to say that i was attact by onion ninjas.. because onion makes you cry, and ninjas because you dont see it comming when your reading!...· C0
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